I love how this poem hints of a story but leaves us wondering and to our imagination
Author's Response: Thank you! :o) I always try to give my poetry a "story" feeling!
very delicately and masterfully done. revealing much but not all.
Author's Response: Thank you! :o) I am glad you appreciated! Your words are very kind!
WOW! That was good...I hope your gonna wright another one like that because this world would do good with your poetry!
Author's Response: Hello silver wolf! Wow, thank you very much for your kind words and especially for the enthusiasm you put in it! :o) I have been writing poetry since 15 years, so I guess I will certainly not stop now! Remus inspires me a lot of sweet things; I can almost promise you another poem one of these days... in the meantime, though, a substantial novel might be coming... :o) Take care and thank you again!
I love this poem. Its so beautiful, you dont seem to be struggling to find rhythm or maing up silly words and images just to make a rhyme. There exists in it rhythm, even though it doesnt realy rhyme. I rarly find a poem as such that I enjoy. The other wonderful thing about it is the story---too often people write 3-line poetry that doesnt tell us anything. Lovely story.
Author's Response: Hello Vulpes_Velox! :o) Thank you very, very much for your nice review, aw! It is my first post on Wolfsbane (though a far more substantial one might come soon) and I was not sure if I would get any review at all for poetry. I have been writing poetry since 15 years and I usually try not to "bound" myself to rigid rules such as a pattern of rhymes (though I do try it from time to time, when I feel masochist!); I prefer to put my energy into finding evocative images and word combinations that are musical (I read my poems out loud many, many times when I write). I am glad you enjoyed it; thank you again, you made my day! :o)