Absolutely beautiful. Got me very teary-eyed!
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
That was beautiful. I've never read a story like it. Wonderfully done!!
Author's Response: Thanks a lot :)
What a beautiful, moving, and hopeful story. Even if Snape is OOC, I still think this story is great.
Author's Response: Hah, I sometimes cringe when I read it because of the characterisation ;) Thank you.
What an exquisitely sad and beautiful story of trust and healing. Well done.
Author's Response: Thank you; I'm glad you like it.
This is such a sweet and powerful story to me. I thank you for posting this masterpiece up for us.
Wow. I've never actually cried while reading a fic before. It's so heartrenching. Really beautiful. Keep up the fabulous work.
Author's Response: Thank you for reading, I'm glad you like it. The story is complete now, but I might write a sequel one day.
Wow. This is so... utterly heart wrenching. So beautifully written. So... wow. My chest felt like it had a weight on it the entire time as I read. You brought tears to my eyes multiple times. This is incredible. Thank you for writing such a wonderful story. I hope perhaps you might concider a sequel sometime. Excellent.
Author's Response: I'm happy you like it so much, thank you. I do consider a sequel, but it will take some time. At the moment, I can't write anything for this story line.
Oh my God! That was the BEST ff I've read! Ever!
I had tears in my eyes...it was like I was Severus, going through everything he felt, watching Remus get better.
-sigh and swoon-
It's a shame the rating only goes to ten. In my book, it's an eleven! Amazing. Loved it all the way through. Bravo, brava!
Author's Response: Um *blush* yeah, what can I say? THANK YOU!!! :)
oh that was so beautiful! I hope that Remus eventually gets healed enough that Harry isn't so unfamiliar to him! its a wonderful story, you did such a wonderful job!
Author's Response: Thank you. I'm happy you like it. I might write a sequel on day, to solve the thing with Harry etc.
I am really enjoying this story. I love the character development. You have taken Severus and Harry in a direction I would never have anticipate. Thanks for sharing
Author's Response: Thank you! I didn't expect the development between Harry and Severus myself when I began writing. Some things just develop in time.
I am enjoying this story very much. I know that writing a WiP can be difficult with our real lives getting in the way, but I am happy that you've updated. I agree that Snape is out of canon but you describe his emotions well. Additionally, I am glad that this story is portrayed with a slow and almost painful healing process for Remus. It is how people really heal, physically and mentally. I don't know if I have reviewed this before, but I really do enjoy this story and hope that you complete it as soon as you are able.
Author's Response: Thank you for the kind review. I know Snape is a little out of canon, but to be honest - he's terribly hard to write IC ;) The healing process: it would be too unrealistic if it went too quickly. The story is complete now - I fear it would get tedious if I continued, and it ends on a hopeful note this way. There will, however, be a sequel in form of a one shot, which takes place some years into the future.
I have just joined this sight and found the story it is a lovely story although I think Snape is a little out of cannon! But it is lovely idea that something like this could have made him the way he is and explain the way Remus reacts in the Pensieve scene in GOF. Please keep writing, I hope he accepts Harry sometime soon.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.
I. LOVE. THIS. STORY! It pulls at the heartstrings in SO many ways! I hope you continue to update and I have to ask if you have an alert system that lets your fans know when you do?
ps, this might come up twice as my computer wouldn't send it...
Author's Response: Awww, thank you! I have updated now...
This is a wonderfully haunting story. You deal with Lupin's condition in a realistic manner. There's no cheap tricks of a miraculous recovery as soon words of love are spoken by Severus. No, progress is measured in small, shakey steps and you portray them skillfully with a delicate brushstroke of words. I look forward to reading more of this story and hope that you update soon.
*sniff* Lovely, very touching.
This is a beautiful story and a pleasure to read.
Author's Response: Thank you very much :)
This story is beautiful!!
Please hurry and update!!
I was a devoted Remus/Sirius shipper, but have since realised through the help of this story that maybe Remus/severus could work.
I love the delicateness with which you have handled the subject matter, and want to thank you for helping me to feel again for the first time in a long time!!
Even if it is about a fictional werewolf and his snarky potions master!!
Author's Response: Thank you very much for this review :) I don't like Remus/Sirius too much, although I must admit it's a very plausible ship. I'm very glad my story helped you in some way.
It's a plasure to read this fic. I love your characters and the way you carry the dialogues, simplicity and complexity at the same time. I canīt wait for the rest!!!
Author's Response: Thank you very much :) I always feel I have problems developing the dialogues, so it's very encouraging to hear that people like them. As to "smiplicity and complexity": I just think there can be much more conveyed in simple words than only what they mean on the surface.
This seems to be a very good story! Keep it up!
Author's Response: Thank you, I will!
What a very well written story! I really am enjoying it. Keep up the good work. I am looking forward to your next chapter. ~ Nyx
Author's Response: Thank you, I'll try to update soon ^^
Hi! Iīm from Argentina so please forgive my mistakes in the language. I love your fic and I hope to read more about it soon. So congratulatons and please, please go on.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review, and don't worry, English isn't my mother tongue either ;) I'm currently working on chapter four, so I hope you'll get to read more soon.
I like this fic. I thought it was great seeing Snape and Harry slowly learning to stop despising each other as they worry about Remus health.
Author's Response: Thans for your reviwe :) It would have been completely ridiculous and immature if hey had went on fighting -- with him dying.
Marvelous! I loved the way you opened the chapter. I like that Remus still was not speaking because it allows the focus to be on Snape dealing with his thoughts and feelings. Loved the interaction between Snape and Harry and I felt sorry for Harry. This is such a wonderful piece of work! I anxiously await more. I keep wondering will Lupin regain his speech and if he does what will his first words be. Thanks for sharing this wonderful story!
Author's Response: Thank you for your reviews! I like mute!Remus, too ;) And the entire story will be from Snape's POV, mainly dealing with his feelings and thoughts, regardless of what will happen with Remus. I bet you felt sorry for Harry *snickers* even Snape did, and that really means something ;)
Wonderful! What a powerful story. Very, very well done!