Good writing and you keep it realistic. It works well and makes sense
Author's Response: Thanks, R.A.B. Keeping it realistic and having 4 distinct personalities was hard for this one, but I'm glad that I took the challenge. :D I should have another chapter submitted soon.
This is a really great tie to the books. It's realistic and well written
Author's Response: Thanks, Summer. While writing this, I was struck by how little there was, though that did make it a wonderful opportunity for me. :) I had fun filling in some of the blanks.