Reviews For New Moon Rising
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Reviewer: Num Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/03/2006 09:08 am Title: Chapter Three

Please update, I'm really enjoying this story. The relationships you've created are totally believable, and your plot's going well. Please please keep it up and update soon!

Author's Response: Thank you for the lovely review - they're what keep me going! Right now, I'm rewriting a few chapters (not a major overhaul, just a few tweaks here and there) and once that's done I'll hopefully be reposting them and updating very soon. So watch this space...

Reviewer: darkangel Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 08/16/2005 11:47 am Title: Chapter One

lol. very characteristic. but i didn't imagine lily so short. up to jame's shoulder maybe... but exellent so far. yes. she can't beat remus! remus rocks with his vegetarian habits and his monthly transformations. he so much more superior to all the others. james and sirius close behind. i really like the way you described them. so much how i pictured them. (cept lily) cant wait for when remus arrives and what sort of mayhem will occur all night * shaking head* i feel so sorry for Mrs. Potter.... any way. keep goin and keep up the good work :D

Reviewer: Melvacaea Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 07/29/2005 03:10 pm Title: Chapter One

It has great potential -- we always wonder who LILY'S friends were and several ploys are done with them to hook up with the Marauders. I give you warning though: don't turn her into a Mary Sue. She's sounds fair enough adn the idea of her being tall and feeling gawky fits with the adolescent stage she's going throught. Please, continue! -Mel

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