Reviews For Bound By The Moon
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Reviewer: juliajane Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/27/2009 05:18 pm Title: 9. Regrets, Recriminations, and the Quest for Answers

Nicely plotted, but oddly undramatic.  I think you have an epic story here that's begging for more detail, drama, and suspense.  Of course, that'll mean tons more writing, so I sympathize!  I would suggest maybe fine-tuning some of the dialogue to suit the characters better.  I don't know if you're trying to sound like Rowling, but I dont' think Lupin would ever say something like "Yeah, all right."  Snape is a little more in character.

Reviewer: wolf moonshadow Anonymous star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 12/10/2004 12:52 pm Title: 9. Regrets, Recriminations, and the Quest for Answers

Interesting concept. I am curious what Snape finds in the sequel. I liked the idea of the vamps having some respect for Lupin as the warewolf. The dialogue between Snape and Lupin was very entertaining.

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