This is wonderful. But where's the rest??

lol. cute story, just please, please, please tell me that there is more!!

Briliant, i truely enjoyed it. I do hope you update soon!

Brilliant! I really want to know how it all plays out on Saturday of course, in detail;) I liked how you portrayed Remus here, especially when he looked at Hermione carefully -- that small sentence conveyed the whole feel of the scene. I love writing like that! It creates a lot of suspense and anticipation and you can really feel the tension between them. That is the absolute BEST. That's actually better than any sex scene written -- the whole chase part. He looks at her, she looks at him, they look away, they look back, and so on. Great work. Please grace us with more:)

are u going to continue ths? i really hope u are..i like how u still make hermione seem not as mature as Remus, b/c it's true. eveyone alwways seems to portray her as the mature one, and i guess he is, but not so much , not as much as most adults can be. if that makes any sense, she's till very much a child. anyways loving the story, update asap!