[Report This]Date: 08/17/2008 01:33 pm Title: Chapter 7
Bloody brilliant! :) Loved it, from the first letter throughout the "corny" ending - fantastic. Wolderful work, well written and simply intrigueing. :)
[Report This]Date: 11/04/2007 08:28 pm Title: Chapter 6
YOU HAVE A SICK MIND BUT i LIKE IT!!!!yOU WRIGHT GOOD STORYS!!!
[Report This]Date: 05/09/2007 12:40 pm Title: Chapter 7
I loved this it is now one of my favourites, i also love the three weddings and a funeral.
[Report This]Date: 06/19/2006 01:33 am Title: Chapter 7
Splendid, all of it! And the Kool-Aid reference was a lovely touch.
Author's Response: thanks, savage_eloquence! glad you liked it! kool-aid, lol. i thought it took the 'romance novel' edge off the ending
[Report This]Date: 10/02/2005 09:28 pm Title: Chapter 7
Yay, you updated! i've been checking every day. I like how you started off this chapter with the newspaper article and I liked the ending, although it was a little romance novely:) i can't wait to read the Draco Pansy story!! Bravo!
Author's Response: Every day? I feel so loved! Glad u liked it-and the ending b/c i'm really bad at endings. :P
[Report This]Date: 08/28/2005 10:31 am Title: Chapter 6
The affair is still going strong and it seems as though Lucius is becoming more jealous. It's good to see him finally show some emotion towards his beautiful wife. Bella is also on form in this chapter. Trying to make Lucius fall in love is going to be hard work though. Even for a sister Black.
[Report This]Date: 08/28/2005 01:04 am Title: Chapter 1
This is good. Have you read the half blooded prince, cause in that book it said that Snape was not a traitor but Voldemort's favorite death eater.
Author's Response: Yeah, I read it, but I started this story way before HBP and anyway it's sort of A/U now for that and many other reasons.
[Report This]Date: 08/27/2005 06:55 pm Title: Chapter 6
This is an absolutely fabulous chapter! Thanks for the update!
[Report This]Date: 08/27/2005 11:07 am Title: Chapter 6
Ooo that was very good. Very angsty and included a jealous Lucius. I give it two thumbs up and I can't wait for the next chapter!
[Report This]Date: 08/18/2005 05:28 pm Title: Chapter 5
This is a really intriguing story. I'd love to see where it goes.
[Report This]Date: 08/08/2005 03:33 pm Title: Chapter 5
I am unsure who you will pair Narcissa with in the end but i do hope that we see some more emotion from Lucius towards his wife. After all she is a rare beauty and he would be a fool to let Snape take her. Although i do love the S/N action going on here. Who to chose? Who to chose? I guess that's up to you to decide.
[Report This]Date: 08/04/2005 11:56 am Title: Chapter 5
I really enjoy reading this story. Can you possibly have a little more Snape/ Narcissa action, only for the purpose of making Lucius jealous of course. Keep writing, I hope to see the next instalment soon!
Author's Response: Hmmm...I like that idea. A lot, actually, since even I'm not sure who she'll end up choosing. lol. Thanx for the review.
[Report This]Date: 07/15/2005 03:21 am Title: Chapter 3
Simply perfect! Don't stop writting or all will die of boredom and stupidity.
[Report This]Date: 07/08/2005 05:40 pm Title: Chapter 3
Fabulous! Please write more
[Report This]Date: 07/07/2005 02:03 pm Title: Chapter 3
Ohhh..HOLY CRAP.I just love this story, and I feel so bad for her. How she couldn't resist her desires, and has that inner-turmoil of the betrayal of Lucius that he didn't deserve. WHAT A CLIFF HANGER!! Will she lie? I'm hoping she does, but im hoping she doens't. I think either way he'll hate her, and knowing Lucius Malfoy, just may not forgive her. but that would be TERRIBLE. Please PLEASE continue this! -DK
[Report This]Date: 06/27/2005 11:41 am Title: Chapter 2
A very steamy scene, the bit in the restaurant.
This Snape is so bad, it kinda makes you want him. Alas. The Bad-Boy Syndrome has once again struck.
Author's Response: lol...i know. i can't get enough of the bad boys. :)
[Report This]Date: 06/18/2005 02:04 am Title: Chapter 1
Interesting angle to take. An adulterous Narcissa? Can't really see her switching alligences to men so quickly. But you wrote her desperation and anxiety over Lucius well. Will there be more?
Author's Response: yeah there will be more eventually