...Interesting... Very... Please, update soon. You have a few spelling errors in here. "and" is used instead of "wand" in one of the sentences... It's a good plot. Believable, entertaining, capturing... Holds the attention. Good. Write more.
It was a very good story.I am looking forward for another part.
i like this! you should continue. i'll beta if you want. i used to for a friend who's left the fanfic scene.
I Loved this fic keep up the good work and update soon. I've always wondered how Severus would react if he was ever bitten, given his aversion to werewolves. You have done a good job and i hope to see more soon. Cya Aussie Mel
I hope that you will find your muse soon!
Im looking forward to an update...I have registered here only because I wanted to read this ff! :-)
ahhhhhhhhhhhhh update soon i wanna know what happens lupinsangel
Very interesting. I like the thought of Goyle as his past lover, puts a twist on the whole situation. I will be eagerly (and impatiently) waiting for Chapter 2. My favourite slash pairing is Remus/Severus, and I cannot wait to see what you do with their relationship... PLEASE UPDATE!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! It started off so easy to write, then my muse up and walked out on me. Don't you just hate it when that happens?
Oh its on here too! Great! I posted my review on Serpensortia! ...
Author's Response: Thanks Ann! I just saw it. You made my day by posting two reviews!
It is an interesting take on the idea of a punishment for traitors. I would like to know how close to the full moon they are and some background on your story's point that werewolves would be able to infect others while in their human form. I also am wondering what kind of a werewolf Goyle is - he certainly doesn't seem like an alpha male - he came up kind of cloying. I was a bit confused because it seemed like his character actually expected a person he'd been in a gay relationship with twenty years before to respond positively? to intimacy that was only a by-product of a purposeful infection. I also hope that your Remus character is more forceful, dominant and has more alpha male personality. Please? Oh - I don't think you have reached slash yet - just kind of oddly non-violent in the application of the bite. You do have a very nice writing style. I am interested to see where this goes.
Author's Response: That was great constructive criticism! Exactly the kind of thing I was hoping for. How close to the full moon? That will be chapter three, the first transformation. What I intend to do is have one chapter focusing on Remus and one on Severus. While Remus certainly won't be a pushover, we have to wonder how dominant anyone could be when put next to Severus. Also, Goyle (like his son) is very thick and would not really realize that Severus is no longer interested in him... at least that is how I interperet his character. As for my writing style, I owe it all to Amethyst. She didn't help with this story in particular, but she taught me so much about dialogue and narrative. Without her my stories would still look more like scripts than a creative story. Thanks for reviewing!
Um, not slash, not yet. Just thought you'd like to know. That was just a bite from a male werewolf. Still...a good chapter. I like all the hexing and such going on, some good descriptions, and your Voldemort is pretty nasty as he should be. Looking forward to seeing what you do with Lupin's character (this being Wolfsbane and all).
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! I know this is Wolfsbane, but that was more of a prologue. I should put that... The next chapter focuses almost completely on Remus, don't worry.
No no I like you did good for your first try. Keep up the good work. Write a new chapter soon.