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Reviewer: SataiDelenn Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 09/27/2010 02:32 am Title: Chapter 1: Dehumanization

YES! I found it! I'm so happy! I thought I'd lost this story after Wolfsbane was shut down!

I know it's been two years since you updated, but I do hope you haven't abandoned this story. I'm just going to assume that you've put it on hiatus until you're ready to return to it. On that note, I'm adding it to my favorites list so that I can watch for any potential updates! (hint hint)

Reviewer: Lill Snape Anonymous star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 09/13/2008 06:28 pm Title: Chapter 12: Consequences

lol - sorry - I was so miffed that I did not realize that you (the author) wrote that line. Anyway, I was wondering, am I getting confused in the story, cause I thought you went with the depiction that werewolves could not hold jobs, and yet I got the feeling that on the other hand you where indicating that Edward could look forward to possibly getting into the construction business, so to speak (because of the blocks he was playing with at home). Have a nice day.

Reviewer: Lill Snape Anonymous star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 09/13/2008 06:16 pm Title: Chapter 12: Consequences

Someone stated as the end of their conversation: "....all the potions come from reputable, knowledgeable brewers, so there shouldn't be any problems with it. Right?" My feelings, 1st) Mom INSISTED that all the wolves had to ONLY use potions from brewers that the MoM approved. Great so now, Remus (not to mention the other compliant wolves) is stuck because the potions Severus procurred for Remus are just in a jumble with every other APPROVED brewer's potions and the MoM has no idea which brewer created the tainted supply. Well isn't that just effing dandy. (Can we say i am pissed on the wolves behalf). 2) Why did the MoM not have the potions labelled as this came in as belonging to say Remus brewed by said brewer, etc. Or, 3) at least, if the MoM was going to stock pile the potions, make sure the potions where at least separated as RECEIVED from whichever brewer. grrr going back to reading now. p.s. getting a real kick outta this story, thanks for sharing.

Reviewer: Lill Snape Anonymous star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 09/13/2008 02:56 pm Title: Chapter 8: Progress

OMG - what is Lydia (a reviewer) talking about - you just stopped writting - what a loss - it has been a couple of years - sure we the readers can not entice you to pick up the reins again *sits hoping you might respond*.

Reviewer: Lill Snape Anonymous star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 09/13/2008 12:42 pm Title: Chapter 5: Returning

Well, little confused here but, slowly getting to understand what is going on. Found your story by accident, but did not realize that there was a series of stories relating to each other when I started to read this, impressive, congratulations. My only concern is that this is showing as started Dec. 15/04 and last updated Nov. 26/05 but marked as NOT completed. Hope that is an oversight on your part. I am responding to your concern that this as a stand alone, flowed. Yes, I would say that it has no difficulty that I can see as far as flow is concerned. I enjoy reading the reviews other readers submit and the author's responses to same; that is how I figured out that there is also "FTWMD", "Bittersweet" and "Still Waters Run Deep". I want to finish this story and then start at the beginning to enjoy the whole experience in order. Thank you for sharing and hope you have a great day.

Reviewer: SarahOfTheFunk Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/20/2008 01:13 pm Title: Chapter 15: Rescue

i have officially found one of THE best RL stories around... promise me u will update soon ye?? *gives cookie* to keep u going ^^ xxx

Reviewer: Marauder1 Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 08/04/2006 06:42 pm Title: Chapter 15: Rescue

I love this story! I almost stopped reading it after the first couple of chapters because I was so disgusted by how the Ministry was treating Remus! I'm glad I kept reading though! Please update soon! You have a wonderful tallent. Keep up the great work. Marauder1 AKA AirForceMarauder (fanfiction.net)

Reviewer: Kathy Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/16/2006 12:16 am Title: Chapter 15: Rescue

The thing I love about this Fanfic is how you made Remus seem real. You gave him emotions that were relatableand understandable. Also, I must say it is quite odd seeing Snape like this, butI must say I love it, great job. What is this i hear about you not writing anymore? I really hope you post at least one more chapter

Reviewer: Magenta Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 03/25/2006 12:12 am Title: Chapter 15: Rescue

Are you going to update this soon? I hope you are. I love this story.

Reviewer: Nox Somnium Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 02/05/2006 05:28 pm Title: Chapter 15: Rescue

WRITE MORE WRITE MORE! I would have reviewed all chapters, but that would have made me take longer in getting to the next chapter..... The do we get post line, was hysterical. My empathy is so strenuously aroused. The language has been a little much for me I admit. I know I know, people, epsecially some people, simply swear a lot. However could the f word not be used? or could you find some fun creative way of saying someone swore? I adore Remus anyway, but this entire fic is simply so real. I got soooo mad at Lara in the first chapter. Now I just want to assasinate the Minister. I very rarely say this to people, but you're fic is absolutely brilliant. I have to go read the other one now. I was wondering, when is this set?

Reviewer: Pigwidgeon Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 01/02/2006 03:22 pm Title: Chapter 15: Rescue

Snape getting a Howler...bwaahaahaahaaha!!!! I about fell out of my chair at that mental picture. I'm still chuckling. This chapter was a great lifter from the last one, I'm still grinning. I'm liking Snape, here. Snarky, take-no-nonsense, but he has a heart. Oh, and the Weasley sibs mentioning about not checking their post, hee hee hee! Brilliant as always!

Reviewer: Pigwidgeon Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 01/02/2006 03:10 pm Title: Chapter 14: Pity the Stray

*headdesk!* Aurgh! Communication is such a wonderful thing -- and miscommunication can lead to such troubles! And isn't it typical that the law supercedes common sense? Lovely, well-balanced story. Lara is an increadible OC.

Reviewer: Pigwidgeon Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 01/02/2006 02:58 pm Title: Chapter 13: Don't Underestimate Them

Again, wow. This was increadible. Frightening, and all to real, that no one would have keys and eventually the beauracracy would break down amongst the flunkies. Poor Edward, you don't blame him for launching himself at Lara like that, but at the same time, Lara is doing her level best to correct the situation. And I forgot to mention this, but isn't it a shame this basic level of treatment -- barely humane -- is getting whispers of beaing "too costly?" Wow, but is that a commentary on the state of things.

Reviewer: Pigwidgeon Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 01/02/2006 02:31 pm Title: Chapter 11: Good Reasons

Boy did I fall behind on this wonderful fic, and my apologies. Glad to be able to catch up. If I haven't said this, I ADORE Edward! He is so cute, so precocious, and yet so vulnerable. Interesting about the blocks -- will he ever be able to use his talent? Or will be he confined by prejudice towards lycanthropy? ABout time Remus let some of the barriers between him and Diana fall. They are good for each other. I think it's going to be an up and down relationship, but then, what relationship isn't? Great conversation between Arthur and REmus. Laughed out loud when Arthur says that he will continue to be nosy. Well, off to read more!

Reviewer: cdkobasiuk Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 12/30/2005 07:57 pm Title: Chapter 15: Rescue

Awwwww! Great chapter. Bad Sev! Very bad Sev! cdk

Reviewer: cdkobasiuk Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 12/29/2005 10:46 pm Title: Chapter 6: The Price of True Friendship

oh goodness, I love Severus. cdk

Reviewer: cdkobasiuk Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 12/29/2005 08:48 pm Title: Chapter 1: Dehumanization

ouch. That was bad. Good writing. cdk

Reviewer: Mary Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 12/12/2005 01:46 am Title: Chapter 4: Solicitation

----""He could ponder the details of his transformations after he took a piss.""--- That was bloody brillant! beside the fact that this story is really good!( i am merely 3 parts into it).It is quite clever also! i like clever stories! Keep it up!

Reviewer: Horserider Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 12/19/2005 09:33 pm Title: Chapter 15: Rescue

Yay! Snape to the rescue! Took me a while to get caught up with this one, and I'm glad to see you're still working on it. Too bad things keep getting worse for the werewolves, though...more soon? ~HR

Reviewer: Moyruh Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 12/06/2005 09:36 pm Title: Chapter 15: Rescue

I hope you keep this story up, I like it. Its a worthwhile read, in more ways than one. The plot is incredible, and well thought out. The Grammar, spelling, and punctuation, are wonderful. If I have noticed anything 'offish' on them, they werent big enough to remember. Keep up the great work. And tell them same to your Beta. : )

Reviewer: Silver Mo0n 19 Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 12/03/2005 10:32 pm Title: Chapter 15: Rescue

I absolutely love this story! I was very depressed to read on your LJ that you are dropping it. I was constantly looking for updates on it, and I think it's fantastic. I'm actually impressed with anyone who gets their work up on this site, because my fic had "too many issues" according to the management. Anyway, the point is, I'm a huge fan of this story... it's one of the best I've read in a long time, and right up there in my top 10 HP fics (and believe me... I've read a lot!). I think your characterization is excellent, and the plot very original and interesting. I'm sorry to hear that you will not be continuing this story, but I appreciate your decision. -Silver Mo0n 19

Reviewer: Phoenicia Black Anonymous star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 11/30/2005 03:21 am Title: Chapter 15: Rescue

Sweet!! I'm loving this! You've got Remus down to a 'T'. His sensitivity, and everything. Of course, I don't have a soft spot for Severus Snape, but then, I've read 'HBP' so, hey. I'll just pretend it never happened for the sake of reading this story. You write well, and you keep it interesting. Thank you, and you'd better keep writing!!!

Reviewer: Lydia Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 11/28/2005 10:22 am Title: Chapter 15: Rescue

(somehow I submitted this after chapter 8, so I'm reposting it here): I'm so sorry that you have decided to give up writing and I very much hope you change your mind! You are an extremely talented writer; you draw your characters with such sensitivity and skill. I always check for updates of your stories on the Sycophant Hex sites and I'm always thrilled to "discover" another story of yours that's been posted elsewhere. I really hope you reconsider your decision; it will be truly a loss if you stop writing. Please, please keep writing!!

Reviewer: Lydia Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 11/28/2005 10:21 am Title: Chapter 8: Progress

I'm so sorry that you have decided to give up writing and I very much hope you change your mind! You are an extremely talented writer; you draw your characters with such sensitivity and skill. I always check for updates of your stories on the Sycophant Hex sites and I'm always thrilled to "discover" another story of yours that's been posted elsewhere. I really hope you reconsider your decision; it will be truly a loss if you stop writing.

Reviewer: sadlittlesnapefan Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 11/27/2005 06:22 pm Title: Chapter 15: Rescue

NOOOOO!!! Tell me it's not true. Are you really going to stop writing? Please don't take whatever whoever said to heart. Your stories are the only ones I religiously follow and will read as WIPs. I love your characterization of the HP characters and how they build from the original canon. Your plots are always clever and original. The structure of your chapters always leave me wanting more. In short, you're one of my favorite authors. I understand if this is your final decision, but you'll be sorely missed. Thanks for many enjoyable hours of reading!!! Mary

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