Lovely and well written, I really really enjoyed this. His shyness is sooo adorable.
excellent story! It's one of the best ones on this site. You definately captured intimacy and erotism without making it like a porno. The characters were very realistic and I loved Remus' mentally conflict. Great job.
That was my first RL/HG story! And I love it, the tense is well handled and they are so wonderful shy. Very romantic! Thanks!
that was so wonderful it gave me goosebumps.