I've never loved Cissa more. Marvelous, darling.
Great! The correct French would read 'puis-je avoir cette danse'.
Very well written. Excellent description of what I envision the Ministry and the nobility of the Wizarding world to be like. While it was erotic, it was also tasteful with good plotting. *Bows with flourish* Hats off to you!
Very nice story, but... did you use one of those online translator programs for the line of French? It's completely wrong.