Wonderful story! Out of curiosity, the Edward and Lucy from chapter 5 wouldn't happen to be characters from Sense and Sensibility by Jane Austen would it?
wow! I love dark and romantic stories, but I think Ira was a little instable; one moment she seemed to want Lucius, another moment she hated him. However that was what made the story so exiting I guess. Anyway good job!
Author's Response: Thanks, Carmina. Yes, the idea was that it is a love-hate-relationship and that Ira is torn between the extremes.
I think it's great! I totally give you a 10!!! keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Thanks very much, AnnElyse.
WOW! Amazing story! I was utterly captivated throughout it's entirety!
Author's Response: Gee...thanks Otter. Now I'm blushing. :-) Glad you enjoyed the story and thanks for your kind review.
well,well, good and unusual........L.
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Author's Response: Glad you liked it. Thanks a lot for your review.
That story was fantastic! I loved it. I might be young but this story was like real life drama to me. You know how you watch a nice action movie and it gets you all hyped up well this story did the trick. A father and son sharing a girl (wished it happened to me). This is by far my favorite story in this PureBlood section. I'm really hoping for a sequel it seems like it also. You have made Lucius the type of man I want. So strong, handsome, and a BIT posessive. Decreption was oustanding and the plot was incredible! I have been searching for this type of story with the father and son sharing a woman but couldn't find one. I read one a long time ago but it did not meet up to this story standards. I also tried writing one but I failed. Half-way I said it is just annoying me I like to read other people's work. I could've never wrote this story better. Good job on finished your story with a perfect ending!
Author's Response: Wow! Thanks for the rave. Yes, the Lucius character was the one I found the most alluring to write, too. I don't know if I would REALLY wish for something like that to happen to me. It all seems a lot cooler in fantasy than in reality, I believe. ;-) But thanks anyway for your kind review.
love the Macbeth quote ;) this is really good. I've always wanted to ready a fanfic about Lucius and Draco, since they are both incredibly - er - interesting characters. WHen i say interesting, i of course mean sexy :) I'm going to go and read the rest now, so thanks!
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Author's Response: Hi there! Yes, I always thought they were both very...er...interesting, too. *grin* Thanks for the friendly review.
I was wondering, if you could, would you notify me when you do actually come out with the sequel? that would be great. thanks.
Author's Response: Yes, I can. But I don't know yet if and when I get round to writing it. My job's hell right now. (at least as far as the workload is concerned)
oh my god, i loved that story. i loved the ending, with that letter from Lucious. it leads you to believe he'll come back or something, or that its not over. ah, i love it. hopefully you will write more
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review. That's a very nice compliment. I hope that someday I will find the time, right now my job "eats up" most of my time and I haven't written anything for months. *sniffle* There's supposed to be a sequel but there you go...
good story!
Author's Response: Thanks, Kathy! :-)
I loved this i keep reading it again & again. Well done
Author's Response: Thanks so much, Drucilla. That is a wonderful compliment. Glad you enjoyed it.
that was a kick ass story!! keep writiN!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it. :-)
that was really hot!
Author's Response: Thanks, xostinaxo! :-)
that's a good point, actually, l hadn't thought of that! come to think of it, if l was ira l would check that bracelet for hexes then selll it! cash is better than a reminder of creepy sadistic men any day, and she'll need the money when she's at medical school, coz she'll have textbooks and beer to buy!
Author's Response: Yes, that would be the sensible thing to do...but unfortunately Ira is anything but sensible if it comes to Mr M. *g* Ira of course has a "hint" of self-insertion to say the least. There's a real-life equivalent of the bracelet (of course it's not real saphires though). My friend gave it to me on my hen night together with a letter from a certain L.M. telling me off for having the cheek to marry a Muggle. And the bracelet should remind me that I was still his and his alone. Well, what can I say...I'm wearing it at this moment. (Hubby says my friend and I are both silly!!)
Ah, but is this bracelet just like the "collar" he made her wear? Run, Ira! Remember Celeste! And will there be a sequel?
Author's Response: Well...it's left open for the reader to imagine. I thought maybe it doesn't need hexes anymore to keep her bound to him. She's making all sorts of odd excuses for him. Then again, she might just as well come to her senses after a while. Who knows. A sequel is intended, yes. But I don't know when I'll get round to writing it. The problem with this fic is that it is a complete Potterverse in itself revolving around the two girls Corvinia and Ira and the first part was a birthday present for a friend and she does not want me to publish it. There's a part after "Kiss of the Dragon" at Yville Medical School focusing on Corvinia (who is modelled on said friend). So far I've only written it in German and it was a gift, too... but the parts of the story from Ira's perspective focusing on her life I am able to publish. :-) Erm...complicated, I know. *lol* Thanks for reading.
hey, l knew old lucius had enough class to at least send jewelery, well done!
Author's Response: Thanks, zafania. Yes...and I nearly forgot about that. :-)
Interesting turn of events. I wonder how Lucius will feel. Probably not too pleased since she didn't leave on his terms. I love the confusion with poor Draco. I can definitely see that.
Author's Response: I hope the end won't disappoint everyone. A lot of things are kind of left open. There's only the epilogue coming up after this one. Thanks for your review, phoenix.
I would give you a decent review, but there's a bat in my window that's distracting me. So, just telling you I love it... as always.
Author's Response: A bat in your window? Send it over. I love bats. Thanks for your "indecent" review. ;-)
liked the description of corvinia re-transforming. glad iras out, but is she?
Author's Response: Thanks, zafania. Well, could anyone really escape Lucius Malfoy? :-)
I love this story so much. All the chapters. it's so well written. keep up the good work. I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks so much, lacy. The next chapter is on the way, just has to pass validation. :-)
Oh no, he's going to try and lay all the blame on Ira, that can't be good...This story still rocks...Please update soon!!
Author's Response: Thanks, MoonysGirl4Life. (Nice nickname...*lol*) I'll upload the last chapter soon. I hope the end won't disappoint people. Well, it has an epilogue after the final chapter though.
Agree with zafania, I liked Celeste.
Author's Response: Yes. I liked her too. The poor woman. But that's Lucius. Hedonist par excellence. Thanks for your comment.
poor celeste! i liked her, poor lass. mind you lucius is a twisted old git, so maybe she'll be better off wihtout him. then again, isn'ty he nice when he's 'persuasive'? i think i could be persuaded!
Author's Response: I agree. Celeste will definitely better off. And I could be persuaded, too. That's us...we just like gits. Too bad.
Oooo, I wonder if he is actually going to forget...why on earth did she tell him that she loved him? Please update soon! Cant wait for the next chapter!!!!
Author's Response: Well, Ira is just a bit confused. It's a bit of what Muggles call Stockholm Syndrome. I'm glad you liked the story so far. Thanks!
You've done a good job painting Lucius as an incredible bastard. I like the fact that Draco has not lived up to his standards. You kind of got a sense of that from at least the CoS movie, escaping me how much was in the book, I'm embarrassed to say. Good job with the confused teenage emotions Draco and Ira would be feeling. Look forward to reading more.
Author's Response: Thanks very much, phoenix. And I have to admit, I wasn't very much interested in the Malfoys either before I saw the CoS movie. I read a lot closer after that. :-)