Oooh I really like the story! But the ending was a bit too fluffy for me with his head on her lap.
Very nice. I enjoyed reading it. And I didn't mind at all that is was short. Length does not stand for quality (as some people might know ;-)) And the last sentence gave me a good laugh. ;-) Well done! Go on!
Good story. I would have prefered it more descriptive, but then again I'm just really partial to this couple and love any story about them. Keep writing!
Author's Response: So's your review. Thanks for reading my short fic,,, .. And um well maybe it was MEANT to be short..
Narcissa really likes to play doesn't she.