damn! that was good! i like what lm was thinking at the end.
I loved it. I find it interesting to see Lucius bound and tortured rather than Sirius, as it usually is in fic. I was sorry to see this one end, but I think you chose a good pointo to stop at.
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nice...a nausiatingly handsome, long-haired man moaning helplessly. i like this one. short, but good.
Well written and realistic.
This is dark and well written. Captivating from the first line. Great job!
Good job! I really liked it. I did wish it was longer but that's how things go, I guess.