damn that was good story...omg i couldn't stop reading it. awesome AWESOME job!!!
more please on this story
That was great to read. Pretty true to character and very believable. i truly enjoyed.
How sweet, i love the ending.
awww.. sweet. *g* I like a lot. :) well done.
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Brava! This story was, simply put, absolutely brilliant. I'll definitely be reading it again sometime! Thank you for writing.
That was awesome. Seriously awesome. I loved the motorbike aspect of it. Keep writing!
Author's Response: Wow.. thank you so much! I liked the addition of the Motorbikes, too.
Good story. I like it a lot!
Author's Response: Thank you so much hon!