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yay!! I liked it!! When you gave a lil descrip of this chap in 2, I thought it would include Harry, since he was in the 2 chappie. ^^ Guess I was wrong but I liked it!! The twins!! YAY!!! Anyways, keep up the great work!! And UPDATE SOON!!!
Oooh, new chapter of smutness, happy day!
I am rather disappointed that we didn't get to see what actually went on in the room with the twins and Alicia, but Hermione and Draco made up for that in entirety.
If you're at all interested in the SM scene, you must be familiar with a wonderful trilogy of novels, the Kushiel's Chosen series by Jacqueline Carey. If you haven't read them, DO. They relate very much to what you're trying to do here, and there's even a villainess who could out-Slytherin Lucius Malfoy. The books are: Kushiel's Dart, Kushiel's Chosen and Kushiel's Avatar. I wasn't interested in the BDSM scene at all, picked up Dart without knowing anything about what it was about, and absolutely loved it.
Author's Response: That is my favorite Trilogy! I am very aware of the S/M scene.. if you im me or email me i'll talk more about that. Chapter four will see a furthering of Hermione's desires and she will get a true taste of Draco's talents.
that was great, darling!
i loved the collar and the viewing room scene. oh, also loved the info about why and how Harry got Draco's help. *hugs* great job
jessie
Author's Response: thank you hon.. I am really enjoying writing this fic.
I love it!!! Will you write more?
Author's Response: Chapter 4 has been started..
I'm sorry for being a little slow, but I'm not sure of the timeline here - it's been seven YEARS that Draco has been giving her an annual kiss? So Chapter 1 - her first time with Draco - is after seven years of this annual kiss-and-run biz (seven years after he gave her his card?), and Chapter 3 has Hermione asking Harry three years ago about his improved attitude? "Tom Catter’s" is another S/M club? She still doesn't know why Draco wears his gloves?
Author's Response: yes Since Seventh year of Hogwarts... She confronted him for the first time this year only after she confronted him did he take it further, thus giving her his card. Yes, In chapter 3 I wanted to explain more about Harry's involvement with Draco, Tom Catters is more of a Bar that has rooms for rent.. If you have ever read the Anita Blake Book 'Narcissus in Chains' Tomcatters is very much like the club in that book.. where Anita has to rescue Nathaniel. No She doesn't know.. But that explanation is coming soon.. In the Next chapter I think but no promises. I hope that answers some of your questions... if not, feel free to emil me!
i am really interested to see where this is going... eagerly awaiting ch. 3. ; )
I love your story, please write more soon... I dont think i can wait much longer to find out what happens next...PLEASE!!!
Author's Response: I am working on it and am about half done with chapter 3.This was a very busy weekend and i didn't have much time to write but the next few days i should be able to finish the chappie.
Don't worry, I'm far from squiked(I keep forgetting how to spell that word) at your fic... one of the only ways you could do that is if you included someone like the Headmaster in the threesome *shudders* Oh great I just squiked myself...sometimes a vivid imagination is a REALLY bad thing!....Moving on....YAY twincest rules....people really underestimate that! PLEASE update SOON!
PotionsPet
Author's Response: i know it has been along time since my last update but I will be updating very soon!
I ABSOLUTELY LOVE IT!!!! It couldnt be any better, please keep up the wonderful writing and let me know when your next chapters up! i love it -waves a flag with Zephyr's name on it- Keep it up!
I'm enjoying this.
Wow, you involved Harry. He's still torturing himself I see. Well, there doesn't seem that there's a lot you can do about that. Draco must really love Hermione. I know this won't be one of those fluffy fics where they court eachother and get married in the end, just to irritate Lucius--snobby bastard!
Author's Response: No I don't think they will get married in this fic (depends on where the muse takes me) but sometimes the bond of Master/submissive or slave is closer than that of a husband and wife.
Thanks for the warnings! This sounds weird, but Harry-Hermione sex squicks me, so if that's in the next chapter, please put it in the warning. "subjecting her to his curse so soon" - but he plans on using it on her later? He should quit giving Lucius freebies!
Author's Response: No, there won't be any Harry/Hermione in this fic. They will interact but not on a sexual level.
Author's Response: The curse will come into play later but the pain of the Cruatius Curse is not something Draco as a Pro-Dom would subject to a new submissive. Ah well Lucius will get his!
I'm really liking this story. You've written the BDSM stuff in an erotic way and not a brutal one, and there is definitely a difference. Trust Lucius to try to mess things up; I absolutely cannot abide that man in canon or fanfics. I like what you've done with Draco, though. The curse on his hands is truly creepy. I hope it can be lifted before the end of the story, but if it isn't, I can see a good ending anyway.
Author's Response: BDSM does not have to be brutal. It can be part of a loving and fulfilling relationship which is what I am hoping to get across. This is not intended to be a rape-fic.
Oh MY! This is one of the better fictions I've had the pleasure to stumble across ... I'm not usually a Draco/Hermoine fan but the summary caught my eye ... and now I cannot WAIT to see the rest ... The writing captures the essence of a BDSM relationship and Malfoy's "dominance" is very in character ... I admit I was a little hesitant to believe Hermoine would pursue so readily or that the encounter explained would happen so quickly but it's understandable to the plot. Keep writing ... it's a fantastic read
Author's Response: I usually develop the characters motivations slowly. Thier reason for doing something to begin with might seem OoC but it is explained eventually. Chapter 3 is back to Hermione's POV.
kewl story cant wait to see what happens next!!!
Beautiful. I'm looking forward to more of their games! Thank you.
Yummy for my tummy! Okay, seriously now, this was a good little lemon.
I LOVE YOUR STUFF! Although this isn't the sequal to "Careful" :-P But it's wonderful, keep going :-) Shawna