[Report This]Date: 09/07/2006 08:19 pm Title: Etiquette shall soon exist no more
Hmmm, I was thinking Depp, too. Now I have to see if he managed to get himself invited into their bed. Nicely done.
[Report This]Date: 09/06/2006 09:54 pm Title: My Whinstone House, My Castle
Another good chapter. Blaise is a bit of a tease if you ask me. Is he trying to galvanize Draco into movement?
[Report This]Date: 09/06/2006 09:44 pm Title: A Prison of Larger Room
Great chapter. I was a little surprised she didn't recognize Blaise and Draco...I did! LOL
[Report This]Date: 08/22/2006 12:30 am Title: Etiquette shall soon exist no more
Hmmm... I must say that I liked this. It was imaginative and fun, and it had great descriptions! =0)
[Report This]Date: 06/16/2006 09:46 am Title: A Prison of Larger Room
Enjoyable start. The only thing I don't get is that Hermione didn't recognize the boys. She remembers everything, doesn't she? At first I thought McGonagall modified her memories or something, but she understood everything they were talking about. Three years isn't that long, and unless they had disguised their appearances (which you don't mention), I can't imagine her not recognizing Malfoy.
[Report This]Date: 06/16/2006 09:45 am Title: Etiquette shall soon exist no more
The last couple of chapters were funny and cute, but don't go with the first part of the story. Why say that "the stag and the labrador need you to come home" at the beginning, when that obviously is not the case in the least. Why have insane!Ron and comatose!Harry in there at all? IMHO, it would be better as more of a fluffy one-shot with Hermione coming home and hooking up with Draco. Alternatively, it could be a long saga where you actually develop all these plot lines.
[Report This]Date: 06/16/2006 09:23 am Title: A Prison of Larger Room
Enjoyable start. The only thing I don't get is that Hermione didn't recognize the boys. She remembers everything, doesn't she? At first I thought McGonagall modified her memories or something, but she understood everything they were talking about. Three years isn't that long, and unless they had disguised their appearances (which you don't mention), I can't imagine her not recognizing Malfoy.
[Report This]Date: 03/29/2006 05:26 pm Title: Etiquette shall soon exist no more
So darn cute and funny. Did you ever write a sequel?
[Report This]Date: 10/14/2005 04:48 pm Title: Etiquette shall soon exist no more
Well, I like this story and I hope that you choose to update sometime soon!
[Report This]Date: 09/11/2005 11:14 pm Title: Etiquette shall soon exist no more
You had me giggling like some stupid lovesick teenager when you randomly had put Depp into the picture... XD
[Report This]Date: 01/26/2005 07:10 pm Title: Etiquette shall soon exist no more
nice..I like the idea of blaise being so sneaky..true: it's always the quiet ones..good work.
[Report This]Date: 01/19/2005 09:59 pm Title: My Whinstone House, My Castle
It was really good though it could have been a tinsy winsy bit longer. Loved the whole Draco and Blaise dressing part and mentioning Depp was halarious. Look out for a story of my own soon. Hopefully you won't be disappointed.
[Report This]Date: 01/06/2005 09:10 pm Title: Etiquette shall soon exist no more
:D this is such a wonderfull story! Hope to read more from you.
[Report This]Date: 11/12/2004 04:17 pm Title: My Whinstone House, My Castle
O.K. I will allow you are allowed to transfer your story else where, but surely we the readers should be allowed to know when, how and where, I have been only slightly conveniece about the story line, but if I had known that Harry was anul virigin, I would have let the approiate guidelines apply. I love your writings therefore I should not have to state I love your situations completely, thank you.
[Report This]Date: 10/25/2004 11:58 pm Title: Etiquette shall soon exist no more
I really loved this one, Zephyr! I want to know more about Blaise Zabini; I think he might end up being one Slytherin who is not a Voldemort supporter. This story was touching, but it was also filled with humor. Great job!
[Report This]Date: 10/12/2004 02:24 pm Title: Etiquette shall soon exist no more
What can I say? How about ss wonderful as the last chapter.
[Report This]Date: 10/11/2004 01:25 pm Title: My Whinstone House, My Castle
I'll be short and sweet. Awesome.
[Report This]Date: 10/11/2004 01:24 pm Title: A Prison of Larger Room
Very nice. I'll definitely keep reading after that first chapter success.
[Report This]Date: 10/10/2004 09:43 pm Title: Keeping Horses From Betting on People
Thsi is an awesome fic. I love the way you get all the details out in a timely fashion, and you explain enough that the story is understandable without being predictable. Blaise Zabini is an excellent plot devise. Aside from a few grammatical errors, there aren't any typos. Great work!