'Never again' is short but powerful. I keep wondering how the magical world will respond to Lucius' death and what will happen to Narcissa. How will Voldemort react and is Narcissa pregnant with his child... Any chance of a sequel :)?
I like it! He got what he deserved!!
I wonder, is the muggle-born student Hermione? All-in-all a very good work, and Lucius is very in-character, though I admit I never imagined him drinking and beating his family before.
Dang I love that song. I loved this. By the end I wanted to give Draco and Narcissa a big hug-and I usually don't feel that strongly about the woman. Draco on the other hand... Lovely work! :D