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Reviewer: lunafish Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/16/2007 02:35 am Title: The Ambush

This is still one of my favorite responses over on Romancing the Wizard! It's so lovely to see not only Draco and Pansy's easy interaction but also Snape and Sinistra's! And what a fine job you do having us discover Snape's secret along with Pansy.

Reviewer: LogicalQuirk Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/01/2007 02:10 am Title: The Ambush

12-26-2006 18:17

That was very sweet! I liked your hints of a mature Draco as well :)

Author's Response: Hi, LogicalQuirk. I think Draco matured significantly in HBP, particularly in that last scene, so I wanted to reflect it in this story. Thanks for reading and commenting! – SIW

Reviewer: Overhill Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/01/2007 02:09 am Title: The Ambush

11-26-2006 06:29

What a pleasant surprise!

Two beautiful romances for our Slytherins! (I'm surprised that the adults were unaware of Pansy watching them, but then, we wouldn't have the story, would we?)

I like how consistent Draco is in this story as he tells her that the dare is unimportant; we see that Draco knows, and Pansy learns what is truly important.

Author's Response: Thank you, Overhill, for such an insightful review. Draco and Pansy have been close since first year, and more so since fourth. After the war, I envision them as comfortable and content with one another. I see Severus as ready to experience life a bit more, and perhaps Aurora Sinistra is just the witch to help him there. Sneaky Pansy is a clever Slytherin, and she more than likely cast a Silencing Charm on the door before opening it. Severus and Aurora were quite wrapped up in each other, so the timing couldn't have been more perfect for Pansy to see the sensual side of her professors. She had the good sense to close the door on the whole affair and return to her one true love. *smiles* Thanks for taking the time to read my story. - SIW

Reviewer: amsev Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/01/2007 02:09 am Title: The Ambush

11-23-2006 07:51 Rated 9

Very nice story from Pansy's POV!

Author's Response: Hi, amsev. I truly enjoy writing from Pansy's point of view. Thanks for reading and leaving a kind comment. - SIW

Reviewer: Nichalia Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/01/2007 02:09 am Title: The Ambush

11-21-2006 15:23 Rated 9

Awwww, that was so sweet.

Author's Response: Hi, Nichalia. Thanks for reading! - SIW

Reviewer: Hephastus Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/01/2007 02:09 am Title: The Ambush

11-21-2006 04:41 Rated 10

That was lovely; poignant and nicely observed through the young woman's eyes. The conclusion was honest and simply stated and for that reason, immensely powerful. Thank you very much.

Hephastus

Author's Response: Hello, Hephastus. Your kind words thrilled me! I agree with you; sometimes less is more. Thank you for taking the time to read this little story. - SIW

Reviewer: Time Waster Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/01/2007 02:08 am Title: The Ambush

11-21-2006 02:03 Rated 10

A lovely little story, very nicely written and a pleasure to read. Thanks!

Author's Response: Hi, Time Waster! That's a lovely compliment. Thank you for letting me know it pleased you. *g* - SIW

Reviewer: Maggie Anonymous star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/01/2007 02:08 am Title: The Ambush

11-20-2006 22:48 Rated 10

Tender, and sweet. I like this softer side post war attitude...

Author's Response: Hi, Maggie. I think whoever survives will have a new perspective on a few things. Thanks so much for reading! - SIW

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