Wow! Very well done! I like your style of writing, it's very descriptive. : ) First time I read something about this pairing and I really liked it. I enjoyed Harry being submissive. There's so much power in Hermione - authors should more often give her that kind of part you gave her. Great job. Hope you write more!
Very nicely done! I'm working on my own little Harry/Hermione smutlet (that I hope to have up here soon) ... so I was entranced with the pairing. Great job!
*groan*...wow...now THERE's the Hermione I like! Wow. The erotic scenes are very well written. Although I have the slight peculiar suspiscion that she's a little too Mary Sue...but that's just me, and overall, it was a wonderful and worth it 20 minutes. Keep on writing!
Author's Response: I think Hermione would be an awesome Dominatrix! Um, actually if there is a Mary-sue in that story it would be Harry and that is all i'm going to say.