This was beautifully written and the structure & timing of events superb! There is a significant lack of well-written "prank" fiction out there and after reading your story, I was very sorry indeed to see the word "complete" in the listing. As a writer, I know that we have to be true to our instincts and end where we feel appropriate. That said, I would dearly love to read a sequel that carried YOUR Remus' intelligent, thought-provoking perspective. Well done!
Author's Response: Thank you so much. Most of the focus lavished on this incident has always been on Snape, Black and Potter, but I think Remus has an equal claim to this being a life altering event, so I thought I'd give his POV a shot. I'm glad you enjoyed the story. I appreciate getting your comments. :)