Date: 07/19/2009 04:07 pm Title: Chapter 11
Oh, I see trouble coming! He doesn't realize she's a virgin, and she thinks he _only_ wants to have sex with her because of the bond. If they can get past these problems, they will have a strong base; can they get past these problems before she gets in trouble for doing Blood Magic? (She did break the law!) Great writing -- you just grab the reader and draw him/her right into the story!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your thoughtful review! All your questions shall be answered in time. :)
Date: 07/16/2009 05:56 pm Title: Chapter 11
Harry is starting to come around...good. Great job and please post more soon!
~Krystle Lynne~
Author's Response: Harry has to take things slowly! That's just his style. LOL
Date: 07/16/2009 05:54 pm Title: Chapter 10
Oh dear, famous last words, they can never be good. Great job.
~Krystle Lynne~
Date: 06/28/2009 09:04 am Title: Chapter 9
Wow. I'd swear but I don't know if that's ok in a review. Severus actually truly feels bad for her and she doesn't even acknowledge it. And Sirius was heading on the right track but being the usual blunt idiot he is, he messes it up. I love how in character they are and stuff so keep this up!
Author's Response:
Feel free to swear! I won't hold it against you, promise. :)
Yeah, she definitely takes Severus' help for granted. She has a lot on her mind.
Thank you so much for the kind review!
Date: 06/23/2009 11:39 pm Title: Chapter 9
Hmmm...I wonder how this will turn out. What will Sirius say to Hermione just walking past him without noticing him. Great job and please post more soon!
~Krystle Lynne~
Date: 06/18/2009 08:54 pm Title: Chapter 8
Aaaaahhh!! Oh no, you can't end a chapter like that!! I adore Sirius (he's a sex god if there ever was one), and it's killing me to not be able to find the end of this story! I keep coming back to it and reading the latest bits, only to be left craving the next chapter (not that that's a complaint, mind you). *Sigh* It's such a good story!
Author's Response: I'm so glad that you like the story! It's still a WIP, but the updates on this site are quite behind. I have been very negligent uploading it here, I'm sorry to say! However, if you feel the need to catch up, it's updated more regularily at Granger Enchanted. I hope to get the updates on this site up to speed ASAP. I am sorry about that.
Date: 06/18/2009 01:08 am Title: Chapter 8
Ooooo...some action! I can't wait to see how this ends up. I loved the scene when they wake up, it was actually, really cute. Great job and please post more soon!
~Krystle Lynne~
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. And thanks for reviewing every chapter! I haven't updated as much on this site, but I'm trying to play catch-up now. If you want more of the story, it's quite a few chapters ahead at Granger Enchanted--but you have to promise to review each chapter there, because I really look forward to them! :)
Date: 06/16/2009 02:35 pm Title: Chapter 1
I'm really intrigued by this story and where the plot is headed... please update soon!
Date: 04/28/2009 01:54 am Title: Chapter 7
You know, everything would be much easier if people would talk with each other! But then again, that would make this story too short and not as interesting. Awesome job on this chapter, I'm very curious to see what happens when Sirius figures out everything that she's done, besides the Blood Magic. Please post more soon!
~Krystle Lynne~
Date: 04/12/2009 01:54 am Title: Chapter 6
Well, that was an interesting chapter. I would hate to have been either Hermione or Sirius. I am SO glad to see what Sirius is actually coherent. Awesome job and please post more soon!
Date: 03/28/2009 02:07 am Title: Chapter 5
Hmmmmm...I'm curious as to what this 'new' low groan means. Great job though, especially with Severus and Poppy. Can't wait to read more.
~Krystle Lynne~
Author's Response: I love love love writing Severus! Glad you liked it. Enjoy the update!
Date: 03/27/2009 12:36 am Title: Chapter 5
Woot woot! Update, please! This is awesome! Oh, I just love Sirius fics, especially ones like this one! I can't wait for him to wake up! Yay! ^^
Author's Response: I love Sirius, too! Thanks for the review.
Date: 03/16/2009 05:59 pm Title: Chapter 5
I am enjoying this story so much. I can't wait to see what Sirius will be like when he is awake. Very interesting and well written. Awaiting updates!
Author's Response: Thank you for the review! Hope you enjoy the update!
Date: 03/09/2009 05:50 pm Title: Chapter 1
I am really enjoying this story. I can't wait to see where this is going. I am glad to see timely updates.
Author's Response: Thank you! I hope to keep the updates timely, I abhor it when authors take ages, or worse, abandon their stories.
Date: 03/07/2009 01:39 am Title: Chapter 1
I'm very, very curious to see where this is going. This could end very well or not well at all. Please post more soon!
~Krystle Lynne~
Author's Response: I will be updating regularly! Thank you for reading.
[Report This]Date: 03/03/2009 11:02 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is brilliant! Very original and well written. I can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Glad you like it.