Reviews For Red Riding Hood
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Reviewer: SataiDelenn Signed star star star star [Report This]
Date: 10/24/2010 11:49 pm Title: Chapter 3 - Freedom?

Very good story. My only issue is with the very end. How is her pregnancy explained if she thinks Lucius is a made up dream? Further, how does she know her child's father is a wizard since she thinks Lucius is a dream? Sorry, I have problems with things that fail to make sense is all.

Reviewer: candysbn Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 05/26/2009 04:35 pm Title: Chapter 3 - Freedom?

Fantastic story! I loved it. Somehow she didn't forget Lucius completely.

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