Wow...I like how you incorporated the whole backstory in this through their dialogue. Sophie is adorable but I really thought that Hermione would use different names for her children, especially if they are Lucius' kids. Wondreful job.
I really liked this story. It was well thought out and I would love to see what happens next. A reunion with Astoria and Scorpius, Hermione telling Lucius, Lucius getting out...oh the possibilities. Great job.