This was very nice. I'd never before read the poem used here, but I find that I like it.
The ending sentence of each different piece is very powerful.
I found myself wanting to make an account here, merely to say so, once I saw the ridiculous reviews you'd gotten. This is a wonderful piece of writing. It deserves better comment.
haha magonogals gay... sorry lol
ermmm... rite
i dont get it...
Author's Response: Sorry to hear that. Between the author's note and the summary, I think the concept is fairly self-explanatory, and the point of each drabble seems pretty clear, so I won't rewrite it all here. Not sure else to tell you. *shrug*