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Date: 01/08/2015 11:23 pm Title: part 4 of 4

Wonderful.  what a gem, i really enjoyed their teasing and payful nature. Great job.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm a firm believer that playfulness - and bucketloads of UST - are needed to complete the sexy times!

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Date: 01/08/2015 11:01 pm Title: part 3 of 4

What a wicked tease. Your writing makes them both so flirty and sweet, a touch of boldness with shy undertones.  brilliant writing!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad all the nuances I was trying to show worked for you!

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Date: 01/07/2015 10:59 pm Title: part 2 of 4

Love the sexual tension, it is palpable! Great job!

Author's Response: And it only gets stronger! Thank you for reading and commenting!

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Date: 01/07/2015 03:57 pm Title: part 1 of 4

Lol, very funny start

Author's Response: Hee, I always aim for humour in smutty fics. Even though this one is far more UST than anything else.

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Date: 02/03/2010 01:33 pm Title: part 4 of 4

Loved it! Couldn't decide if I wanted to be Harry or Draco. I think I would have wanted to be the one in the middle. lolol Oh, the tension! You did an amazing job of building up their heat and Harry's anxiety. It was an enjoyable read. :-) Hmmm...can you do anything with Severus and a certain yummy blonde?

Author's Response: I'm so happy it worked for you! This story was all about the tension! Unfortunately, even though I like a bit of Snape/Draco as much as the next person, I'm very intimidated by the task of writing a believable Snape. The closest I managed to get was a bit of subtextual Snape/Draco in my story Past, Present, Future.

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Date: 01/27/2010 09:08 am Title: part 3 of 4

In the words of Harry, "uh huh." I think I was right there with Harry. lol This is turning out to be a great story. I can't wait to see how it culminates. I can actually picture Malfoy in those robes. Brilliant job!

Author's Response: I'm glad you're liking it so far! The end is near, so you won't have to wait long to see how Harry reacts to Draco's provocation... Hee hee, I think I enjoyed writing flamboyant, garishly dressed Draco a bit too much.

Reviewer: severus_slave Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2010 04:39 pm Title: part 1 of 4

Hilarious!!!! You had me laughing outloud. This is Potter''s true nightmare. I can't wait to read more of this delightfully naughty tale.

Author's Response: I'm glad you find it funny! I was aiming for humourous (and sexy). There's more, don't worry.

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