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Reviewer: severus_slave Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 06/13/2010 01:57 pm Title: Chapter 21: Potions Success

HOT!!!!!!  I love the way you wrote the snogging scene!  I felt like an intruder lolol.  Poor guy keeps feeling guitly for everything.  It's interesting how you've made his charachter grow so much.  I love the dooubt you place on her also, it's nice to see her conflicted and not so sure of herself.  Hermione is often a very black and white character.

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