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Reviewer: Ramsay223 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/11/2012 01:51 am Title: Index

fantastically written. wonderful concept. well thought out with the different points of view woven through out. sorry the site you worked with before became such wankers. they lost a great author and we gained one, thank you

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review. The concept "Tales of the Battle" was HPFF's and it's a good one. It's a shame that they weren't happy when I decided to rewrite my hastily written originals and post them under my own pen name rather than the shared one. I would have been banned for some other reason by now. Every HPFF banned author I've heard of/from is, like me, male and not a teenager.

-N-

Reviewer: AmyLouise Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 11/30/2011 09:36 pm Title: The Calm Before

I've just read this all through, and it's one of the best. You're a very good writer, and each character stamps its own personality on their chapter unmistakeably. I'm looking forward to more.

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review.

There are four chapters remaining, the next one is now in the queue.

-N0

Reviewer: Bjornsdotter Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/30/2011 10:58 pm Title: Great to be Back

Luna is probably the deepest character in the series. You've done a great job portraying her thoughts.

Author's Response: Thank you. I see Luna's brain as combining child-like honesty with complex thoughts. -N-

Reviewer: Bjornsdotter Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/30/2011 10:50 pm Title: Galleon

I've never cared much for Cho, however after reading this I will probably look at her a bit differently.

Author's Response: Thanks. Looking at Cho differently is all I wanted to achieve with this chapter.  :-)  -N-

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