fantastically written. wonderful concept. well thought out with the different points of view woven through out. sorry the site you worked with before became such wankers. they lost a great author and we gained one, thank you
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review. The concept "Tales of the Battle" was HPFF's and it's a good one. It's a shame that they weren't happy when I decided to rewrite my hastily written originals and post them under my own pen name rather than the shared one. I would have been banned for some other reason by now. Every HPFF banned author I've heard of/from is, like me, male and not a teenager.
-N-
I've just read this all through, and it's one of the best. You're a very good writer, and each character stamps its own personality on their chapter unmistakeably. I'm looking forward to more.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review.
There are four chapters remaining, the next one is now in the queue.
-N0
Luna is probably the deepest character in the series. You've done a great job portraying her thoughts.
Author's Response: Thank you. I see Luna's brain as combining child-like honesty with complex thoughts. -N-
I've never cared much for Cho, however after reading this I will probably look at her a bit differently.
Author's Response: Thanks. Looking at Cho differently is all I wanted to achieve with this chapter. :-) -N-