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Reviewer: veron_25 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 08/26/2012 12:47 am Title: Chapter 1: Summer Day at the Burrow

I just enjoyed this story...you do such a wonderful job and i cannot wait until the next segment to this story!

Author's Response: Thank you!  I hope you enjoy the sequel just as much.  Thanks, Jenny

Reviewer: leaj0rdan Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/08/2012 06:58 am Title: Chapter 39: The End of Freshman Year at WUP

thanks for the amazing chapter ..

it is a really nice chapter :)

is this the end of the fanfiction?

i can't wait for the next story. 



Author's Response: Thank you for your consistent, favorable feedback. I've got lots of ideas mapped out for the sequel, but I probably won't start posting until August.  I like to have the story about half way done before I begin posting (and I tend to write random chapters, not in any order, as the thoughts come to me).  Nice comments like yours keep me inspired, so thanks again, Jenny

Reviewer: leaj0rdan Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/30/2012 05:21 am Title: Chapter 38: Final Exams and Spring Dance

nice chapter haha ...

thanks for the update :) 



Author's Response: Glad you liked it.  The last chapter should be posted soon.  Thank you for all your reviews, Jenny

Reviewer: leaj0rdan Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/01/2012 04:51 pm Title: Chapter 36: Waiting and Revising

nice chapter :)

tabor was truly naive .. and interspecies relations teaching fellow thinking that a MUGGLEborn and a hag would get along ... you think he would know the dangers of a hag ... :L

i really like the end of the chapter ... hermoine truly is not that great at coming up with acronyms haha

 thanks for another great chapter .. keep up the good work

cant wait for the next :) 



Author's Response: Are you reading the story on two sites now? ;-)  I'm happy for the feedback in both places!  Thanks for your constant reviewing.  Keeps me motivated. --Jenny

Reviewer: leaj0rdan Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/23/2012 04:13 am Title: Chapter 35: Plan of Attack

great chapter 

Keep up the good work :)

can't wait for the next

goyle dosnt seem too happy about all this though 



Author's Response: What do you expect?  He's Goyle! :-)  Thanks for the kind words.  The next chapter will be up shortly.  --Jenny

Reviewer: leaj0rdan Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/14/2012 05:03 am Title: Chapter 34: Goyle's Tale

interesting :P ...

can' wait for the next

Ilove draco's charm at the end i imagine it would be so beautiful :) 



Author's Response: I have fun coming up with magical romantic gestures for Draco!  I'm glad you appreciate them.  Thank you for your kind review, Jenny

Reviewer: Siyafa Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/05/2012 03:20 pm Title: Chapter 33: Draco to the Rescue

I love your story! I read through the previous one and this one in two days - I can't wait to find out what happens next, and to see if my suspicions about what's up with Goyle are correct. Keep up the awesome work!

Author's Response: Thank you for your encouraging feedback!  I'm very happy to hear you liked the first story and are enjoying this one so far.  The remainder of the story focuses on Goyle's situation, so hopefully you enjoy what's coming up as well.  Thanks!  Jenny

Reviewer: leaj0rdan Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 04/04/2012 12:28 am Title: Chapter 33: Draco to the Rescue

this is a "Totally awesome" chapter. i reckon its very cute that Draco saved hermoine and that they have made up :). I cant wait to see what happens when they arrive at wup. and to see Tabor's reaction if Hermoine confronts him. Thanks for another really great chapter. :)

Author's Response: I figured since I didn't have Draco rescue Hermione in my first story, it wouldn't be too cliche'd to have him rescue her here.  Plus, there are more action chapters coming up, where Hermione can shine.  Thank you for your encouraging review! Jenny

Reviewer: HermioneMalfoy79 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/03/2012 11:36 pm Title: Chapter 33: Draco to the Rescue

What a pleasing chapter! I'm so glad that Draco (and Harry) made it in time and they made up! I feel like my frustration with their break up was a bit silly now haha can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: I'm glad you were frustrated -- that's how the reader is supposed to feel, if I'm doing a good job.  The next chapter might take a bit more time.  I struggle with the "sexy" chapters... ;-) Thanks, Jenny

Reviewer: leaj0rdan Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/01/2012 03:46 pm Title: Chapter 32: Hermione and the Hag

another chapter YAY!! Real plot twist here and cliff hanger at the end. cant wait for the next :)

Author's Response: It makes me very happy to see that you are following the story, chapter by chapter.  Thank you! --Jenny

Reviewer: HermioneMalfoy79 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/31/2012 03:42 pm Title: Chapter 32: Hermione and the Hag

I've been watching for updates for this story on both MuggleNet's fanfiction section and on here. It's a great story with an original plot I've never seen done before so I get excited whereever I see the update first! But eek! What a cliffhanger! I hope Draco gets there in time :D

Author's Response: Lumos is much faster at approving my submissions, but I found a great beta-reader over at MuggleNet, so I can't complain about them too much!  Thank you for the positive feedback.  It's a real encouragement to me, Jenny

Reviewer: leaj0rdan Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/29/2012 05:49 am Title: Chapter 31: Navigating Being Alone


Unbeknownst to her, Draco, sitting off by himself, watched her with a forlorn expression.^^ i LOVE this part :) ^^ 

Author's Response: Thank you!  I'm glad you're enjoying the story.  And you're smart -- you're here on Lumos, where the chapters always get uploaded faster! :-)  Thanks, Jenny

Reviewer: leaj0rdan Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 03/26/2012 12:12 am Title: Chapter 30: Going Separate Ways

I loved it soo much. i can't wait to see what happens with Hermoine and Draco and Weather Ron steps in or not. its aa

Author's Response: I'm glad you are happy with the story.  I was worried people would be upset that Draco and Hermione broke up.  I can promise a happy ending, though. :-)  Thank you for  your review, Jenny

Reviewer: veron_25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/11/2012 07:16 pm Title: Chapter 20: Spring Semester Begins

Loving your story so far...looking forward in reading the next chapter :)

Author's Response: I just posted the next chapter.   I hope you enjoy it!  Thanks, Jenny

Reviewer: leaj0rdan Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/29/2011 01:59 am Title: Chapter 20: Spring Semester Begins

so well done!! cant't wait for the next chapter. :) 

Author's Response:

Thank you for the nice review.  I admit I fell a little behind over the holidays, but the next chapter is with my beta now.  As soon as I get it back, I'll post it here.  Happy New Year! Jenny

Reviewer: Benedict Signed star star star star half star [Report This]
Date: 06/23/2011 07:50 pm Title: Chapter 1: Summer Day at the Burrow

So glad to see the sequel, been looking forward to it for a long time. Like the start, enough to whet the appetite, not only for the holiday but for Paris and University too

Author's Response: Thank you for your nice review.  We'll get to Paris and university in a bit, but first there's some summer fun to be had. :-) Jenny

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