I just enjoyed this story...you do such a wonderful job and i cannot wait until the next segment to this story!
Author's Response: Thank you! I hope you enjoy the sequel just as much. Thanks, Jenny
thanks for the amazing chapter ..
it is a really nice chapter :)
is this the end of the fanfiction?
i can't wait for the next story.
nice chapter haha ...
thanks for the update :)
nice chapter :)
tabor was truly naive .. and interspecies relations teaching fellow thinking that a MUGGLEborn and a hag would get along ... you think he would know the dangers of a hag ... :L
i really like the end of the chapter ... hermoine truly is not that great at coming up with acronyms haha
thanks for another great chapter .. keep up the good work
cant wait for the next :)
great chapter
Keep up the good work :)
can't wait for the next
goyle dosnt seem too happy about all this though
interesting :P ...
can' wait for the next
Ilove draco's charm at the end i imagine it would be so beautiful :)
I love your story! I read through the previous one and this one in two days - I can't wait to find out what happens next, and to see if my suspicions about what's up with Goyle are correct. Keep up the awesome work!
Author's Response: Thank you for your encouraging feedback! I'm very happy to hear you liked the first story and are enjoying this one so far. The remainder of the story focuses on Goyle's situation, so hopefully you enjoy what's coming up as well. Thanks! Jenny
this is a "Totally awesome" chapter. i reckon its very cute that Draco saved hermoine and that they have made up :). I cant wait to see what happens when they arrive at wup. and to see Tabor's reaction if Hermoine confronts him. Thanks for another really great chapter. :)
Author's Response: I figured since I didn't have Draco rescue Hermione in my first story, it wouldn't be too cliche'd to have him rescue her here. Plus, there are more action chapters coming up, where Hermione can shine. Thank you for your encouraging review! Jenny
What a pleasing chapter! I'm so glad that Draco (and Harry) made it in time and they made up! I feel like my frustration with their break up was a bit silly now haha can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: I'm glad you were frustrated -- that's how the reader is supposed to feel, if I'm doing a good job. The next chapter might take a bit more time. I struggle with the "sexy" chapters... ;-) Thanks, Jenny
another chapter YAY!! Real plot twist here and cliff hanger at the end. cant wait for the next :)
Author's Response: It makes me very happy to see that you are following the story, chapter by chapter. Thank you! --Jenny
I've been watching for updates for this story on both MuggleNet's fanfiction section and on here. It's a great story with an original plot I've never seen done before so I get excited whereever I see the update first! But eek! What a cliffhanger! I hope Draco gets there in time :D
Author's Response: Lumos is much faster at approving my submissions, but I found a great beta-reader over at MuggleNet, so I can't complain about them too much! Thank you for the positive feedback. It's a real encouragement to me, Jenny
Unbeknownst to her, Draco, sitting off by himself, watched her with a forlorn expression.^^ i LOVE this part :) ^^
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you're enjoying the story. And you're smart -- you're here on Lumos, where the chapters always get uploaded faster! :-) Thanks, Jenny
I loved it soo much. i can't wait to see what happens with Hermoine and Draco and Weather Ron steps in or not. its aa
Author's Response: I'm glad you are happy with the story. I was worried people would be upset that Draco and Hermione broke up. I can promise a happy ending, though. :-) Thank you for your review, Jenny
Loving your story so far...looking forward in reading the next chapter :)
Author's Response: I just posted the next chapter. I hope you enjoy it! Thanks, Jenny
so well done!! cant't wait for the next chapter. :)
Author's Response:
Thank you for the nice review. I admit I fell a little behind over the holidays, but the next chapter is with my beta now. As soon as I get it back, I'll post it here. Happy New Year! Jenny
So glad to see the sequel, been looking forward to it for a long time. Like the start, enough to whet the appetite, not only for the holiday but for Paris and University too
Author's Response: Thank you for your nice review. We'll get to Paris and university in a bit, but first there's some summer fun to be had. :-) Jenny