Loving this story - especially how you write Sirius and Hermione. The way you conceptually play with parallel universes and the ideas of time and space is exceptional, and I LOVE it as a premise!...it reminds me of Mandorlas, or the vesica. The more gnostic ideas on manifesting on this plane. the character development of Pansy and Marcus quietly alongside the main characters was fantastic.
I especially enjoyed the lovemaking - skillful, passionate, sweet and fierce simultaneously. So looking forward to following this piece as it grows!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading, Lelle, and for your kind and generous feedback--truly appreciate it! So happy that you've enjoyed this story and how the characters came across. Oooh, love your analogy of Hermione and Sirius' worlds overlapping like Mandorlas/vesica--absolutely! It must have been more prevalent in my consciousness and subconscious than I was aware of because it is exactly what happened to them--yet another way to express what happened, wonderful! And I love your feedback about the gnostic elements, yes, on some level the ideas about mystical knowledge I felt must play a part of it, imho;-). Hoping the lovemaking came across as something organic and real between Hermione and Sirius, so thank you again for all of your affirmation!