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Reviewer: jollygood Signed [Report This]
Date: 01/15/2017 11:50 pm Title: Chapter 1

This would be great to see as the first chapter in a longer story. I like the fun and lightness.

Reviewer: loreen77 Signed star star star star star [Report This]
Date: 12/31/2014 08:46 pm Title: Chapter 1

Great p w p, but that is a cliffhanger ending....i loved but want more!  great job!

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