I quite like this arc of discovery through the history of the relationship.
Agreeing with the first reviewer: a bit short, but hell, it's good!
Author's Response: A bit short???? I don't understand.. Was anything forgotten.. was there something that i should have explained more throughly? Help me people.. !!!!!
I like the story. Good work. Too short for my liking (but maybe it's the right length for this story).
Author's Response: IT is the longest oneshot i have ever written. At just over 4000 words and nearly 10 pages i think it is quite long... I also had a deadline to meet so unfortunately i was not able to make it into a multichapter story... maybe i'll come back to it someday.. After 'Careful' and its sequel are done. Thanks for the review!