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Complete?: No - Published: 12/31/1969 - Last Updated: 12/31/1969
Reviewer: flaming_phoenix Signed star star star star star
Date: 01/28/2008 Title: None

OMG! I absolutely LOVE paella...especially with chicken! Spanish food is amazing! Just watch out for all of that garlic! Anyways...love the scene between Minerva & Malcolm! It was great to see Minerva stand up for & protect Albus' reputation! & it was so cute to see just how much Malcolm loves Gertie! I think that he's in that relationship for the long haul! Poor Albus & Minerva! They just don't get a break anywhere! All of these interruptions! :D Will we find out why Albus is so opposed to staying at his cottage? Does it have anything to do with his idea of courting? I can't wait for the duel & the wedding & the vacation & umm...when Minerva tells Albus about the day when she first realized that she was in love with him...that will be one very interesting discussion me thinks!

Minerva has returned to Hogwarts to teach and has just finished her first term. A series of misunderstandings leads to an embarrassing moment, injured feelings, regret, then to resolution. Stories within stories! The story covers many significant events in Minerva's life and the history of the wizarding world. Features Minerva, Albus, and Poppy, with appearances by Moody, Grubbly-Plank, Hagrid and other canon characters. (Overall rating of "W" is based on the content of later chapters; most material "S" or "B.") Sycophant Hex chose "Resolving a Misunderstanding" to be a Featured Story on Lumos for the month of May 2007.

Not Deathly Hallows compliant. (Begun before DH.)

PLEASE NOTE: This story is currently posted in two parts. This is the first of two parts. Part II begins with the chapter, "The MacAirt Pledge," and there is a link to Part II at the end of the last chapter of Part I. Thank you to CareCrystal for moving several chapters of RaM to a second part, along with their reviews.

Rated: W
Categories: Romance
Characters: Albus Dumbledore, Minerva McGonagall
Genres: Humor
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 122
Wordcount: 3391 - Hits: 5824
Complete?: Yes - Published: 03/24/2007 - Last Updated: 02/15/2008
Reviewer: flaming_phoenix Signed star star star star star
Date: 05/01/2007 Title: Chapter 27: Pleasurable Anticipation

I just wanted to say that I love your story! I started reading it when Mage still existed. I'm sorry that I've never reviewed...I'm so bad about remembering...but from now on I promise that I'll review every chapter! I love the AD/MM pairing. The story shows a wonderful progression of feelings & emotions...I love it! Will they end with one another? & how far into the series do you think you will go if at all? I was just wondering because I think that this story has a lot of potential to fit very well with the existing series! Keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Hi! Thanks so much for reviewing! I'm glad to know that you followed the story over from Mage. And if you miss reviewing, don't beat yourself up about it -- I want you to enjoy the story, not feel guilty about how often you review! That said, I love to get reviews, and it does make it more enjoyable for me to update the story when I know that people are reading and enjoying the story. I like happy endings, so that should tell you something about whether they end up together. *grin* It won't be entirely without difficulty, however -- but that's why it's a long story. I'm telling about their journey to get to know each other. "RaM" will probably end some point far before the series begins, but I think that it may have a sequel. This story basically covers 1937 - 1957-ish, so that leaves a lot of room for more stories! *smile* Thank you for reviewing -- I really *do* appreciate it very much, and I hope you continue to enjoy the story!

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Date: 06/12/2007 Title: Chapter 41: Down the Garden Path

I told you...I'm really bad at reviewing every chapter. But...I still really love this story...& I want to know what the present is!?! At this point, it could be anything...hmm...& this one part from a long time ago keeps coming to mind when Albus says something to Gertrude about a discussion they had that she was going to think about over holiday...I wonder how that will come in to play...something about Gertrude retiring or is it about Minerva? Quin is related to Carson!?! I hope that he's not about to take Albus' place (I doubt it)...but his relation to Carson could cause interesting...complications...& you still haven't told us exactly why Minerva ran away from Albus after Carson's death & what happened when he went to fetch her...the questions just keep coming...update soon please! As always, great work! I'm looking forward to the next chapter!

Author's Response: There will likely be another update later this week. We will eventually learn more about what happened after Carson's death, but not for a while yet. It will come up in an appropriate context. Glad you're still enjoying the story!

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Date: 06/16/2007 Title: Chapter 42: Dalliance and Deception

Oh my god...I think that this chapter just made my day! It's hilarious that Minerva is acting all Slytherin...although I do hope that she & Valerianna get the opportunity to finish their battle of wills (hopefully with Minerva being the victor...kinda like the Transfiguration challenge?) I wonder if Gertrude will alert Albus to the "blooming" relationship between Minerva & Quin? But then, would Albus come racing in to claim her, or would he just sit back because he believes that Minerva is happy? I can't wait to see where you go from here...& I'm still waiting to find out what Albus' gift is!!! Fantastic job as always, keep up the good work & post the next chapter soon!

Author's Response: Thanks! I appreciate it -- you'll see Albus's little gift in the next chapter, and in the one after that, you'll learn what Gertie has to say about Minerva and Quin's little performance. Thank you for reviewing!

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Date: 06/18/2007 Title: Chapter 43: Doubt and Comfort

What a great chapter...I absolutely loved Albus' letter...how much longer until Minerva realizes how he feels for her!?! I can't wait for the show down between Minerva & Valieranna, & are we ever going to find out the true details about Albus' relationship with Valerianna? Great job as always...get that next chapter up soon!

Author's Response: We will learn more about their relationship, getting pieces of the story at different points. Soon after Minerva leaves Cornwall, we will learn a big piece of info about it. I'm glad you liked Albus's letter -- he can be very sweet when he's not censoring himself!

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Date: 06/19/2007 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44. An Early Breakfast and an Owl, Part One

What a cute chapter...you know someone's in love when they begin to overanalyze every little relationship the person that they love has...I'm interested about the Tyree name...what is the importance that Gertrude's older relatives and family friends were so (dare I say) intimidated? Great chapter...now on to the next!

Author's Response: Hi! If you go back and look at the conversation that Minerva had with Poppy just before she owled her acceptance to Gertie -- I think it's called "Curiosity Piqued" -- there's a discussion of the Tyree name there when they're talking about pure-blood snobbery. I'll reproduce a little of it here: “You’re as pure-blooded as any of them, I’m sure. How many people don’t have a Muggle or Muggle-born in their family tree? Precious few, I’ll wager. Besides, the Egidius and Parnovon sides of your family tree are even more ‘respectable,’ and you’re related to the Longbottoms and the MacMillans, as well, aren’t you? And you know what they’d do if they learned your grandmother is a Tyree!” Poppy chuckled. The Tyree name was passed from mother-to-daughter as well as from father-to-daughter, and although a Tyree witch might use her husband’s name in order to avoid confusing people outside the family, she never dropped the Tyree name. Tyree witches were notorious for marrying Muggle-borns, even the occasional Muggle, but no one – not even pure-bloods – ever dared fault them for it. Tyree wizards were more traditional in their choice of mates, but also less remarkable in other ways. At some point in the ancient past, Tyree witches had developed a reputation as fearsome and ruthless witches whom no one dared cross. Although Minerva had seen little evidence of ferocity and vindictiveness in her own Tyree relatives, the legend continued – making their lives a bit too easy, Minerva sometimes thought. Having a reputation, especially an unearned one, as a formidable duellist and patient avenger of wrongs committed against oneself or one’s kin could lead to arrogance. “Poppy, I am not going to get into a . . . a spitting contest with those snobs and start spouting off the names of all branches of my family that haven’t had a Muggle in the line for more than four generations. And I am not a Tyree, so there would be no point in mentioning that.”

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Date: 06/19/2007 Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 44, cont'd. An Early Breakfast and an Owl, Part Two

Hmm...do I sense some subtle (or not so subtle) manipulation on Gertrude's part!?! I love that you had the Slytherin lecturing the Gryffindor on how to be more Gryffindor...priceless...& the quote "grid your loins" is just a perfect summation of the potential disaster waiting at lunch...great job...one of my favorite chapters so far! Keep it up & get that next chapter up soon!

Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it! It was a fun chapter to write. I enjoy writing Gertie and Quin -- and Valerianna, for that matter. Gertrude's seems to be trying to give some rather broad hints, doesn't she?

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Date: 06/21/2007 Title: Chapter 46: A Quiet Afternoon at the Gamp Estate

Ooo...what a suspicious letter from Poppy! What does she know that Minerva doesn't? Quick...get that next chapter up...I'm dying of suspence!!!

Author's Response: I'll post the next chapter in a day or two. There's a lot for Minerva to learn while she's at the Gamps. And Poppy does know something that Minerva doesn't . . . for the moment! Thanks for the review!

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Date: 06/22/2007 Title: Chapter 47: More Relatives

Wow...Valerianna really is an evil little witch...I wonder what she has up her sleeve now? & what's up with using the word "Master" to describe Albus...isn't that a little extreme? & while we're on the subject of Albus, where does this "Uncle Albus" come from? I hope Minerva & Poppy have the chance to talk about Poppy's surprising letter soon. Thanks for the heads up about the update! Great chapter...keep 'em coming!

Author's Response: Minerva thought that "master" was very peculiar, too! You'll see more of Valerianna and get a better feel for her use of the word. And we'll learn the origins of "Uncle Albus" very soon, and Minerva will have a very nice and *extremely* informative visit with Poppy soon after her visit at the Gamps is over. You're welcome for the heads-up. I'll send along another message next time I update. Thank you for reviewing!

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Date: 06/25/2007 Title: Chapter 48: Dinner and Divination

Go Quin...inner eye...subtle matchmaking! What a cute letter...I hope Albus gets to see it! Great chapter...keep them coming!

Author's Response: Yeah, Quin could be quite handy to have around in this story! Glad you liked Minerva's midnight letter!

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Date: 06/25/2007 Title: Chapter 49: Lessons in Letter-Writing

Hehe...poor Minerva...she should have know better than to leave that letter just lying around...Oh Albus, what are you thinking!?! I had hoped that Minerva's letter would enlighten him a bit more. I hope Minerva sets the record straight very soon...another great chapter (no surprise there!). & thanks for the e-mails on the up-dates! I really like them because I don't have to keep checking to see if this story's been up-dated or not! Keep this story rolling!

Author's Response: Albus thinks he's thinking of Minerva's best interests, of course. But he's also a tad insecure in that respect vis-a-vis Minerva because of the whole age difference, and a few other things. Glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for your reviews!

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Date: 06/26/2007 Title: Chapter 50: Games at the Gamps

What a nasty little game of Quidditch...poor Gertrude! Go Quin!!! I'm hoping that he's a part of the BIG clue Minerva or Albus gets! I'm glad that Quin is relentless in his questioning! I hope that there isn't anything bad in the works for Minerva at the dinner party...great chapter! Keep them coming!

Author's Response: Thank you! I think you'll enjoy the party -- even the nastier aspects of it! It should be up in a couple days. :D

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Date: 06/28/2007 Title: Chapter 51: Curious Conversation

Could Gertrude have been any less evasive in her replies!?! Come on...you're killing me here!!! I loved the flashback to Minerva's tutoring sessions! Albus couldn't stay away even then...great filler chapter! Keep them coming!

Author's Response: Glad you liked it! Thanks for reviewing!

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Date: 07/01/2007 Title: Chapter 52: The Lovely Couple

I loved the part where Quin learned that Alory could really talk to animals! That was such a cool scene (the whole hide-and-seek!) So...Albus has been bragging...& showing off pictures of Minerva!!! Someone really needs to give them both a really hard kick in the right direction! Soon! Whoa...what is Val thinking!?! Where have her manners gone!?! Anyways, great chapter & keep them coming!

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked the part with Alroy. :D Eventually one or both of them will add up the clues . . . but I won't tell you who, when, or how -- you'll just have to keep reading! ;-)

As for Val, many of those in attendance had the same questions. But she has become so obsessed with Minerva's presence that she thought only of that, and of Minerva going back and telling Albus that she (Val) was getting married to Flint, that she wasn't thinking of much else.

There will be another chapter up soon -- they will be fairly frequent for the next couple of weeks, after which, they'll go back to a more sedate pace of about one update per week, I think.

Thank you for reviewing! (I put breaks in manually -- I hope they work -- wish there were a "preview" function. If not, you'll see funny mark-up.)

Reviewer: flaming_phoenix Signed star star star star star
Date: 07/03/2007 Title: Chapter 53: Shall We Dance?

Loved it!!! Val is evil...what a bitch...poor Albus, someone better give him a good kick & soon! What a mean ending having Gertie just standing there!!! & I hope that kiss won't cause a change in Quin & Minerva's "relationship." Keep them coming! GREAT CHAPTER!

Author's Response: Glad you liked it! Gertrude in the shadows . . . what a better way to end the chapter? *grin* Thanks very much! I may have the next chapter up tomorrow or the next day at the latest. I appreciate your reviews!

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Date: 07/05/2007 Title: Chapter 54: The End of the Party

There are some really great lines in this chapter! I wish that Minerva would confide in Quin...I think that he could really help Minerva & Albus make process in their relationship. & would Gertie ever just talk plainly? So we've got breakfast with Quin, then Albus & his designs to push Minerva & Quin together (I wouldn't be surprised if Quin shows up at Hogwarts soon on Albus's invitation), then Poppy & her worries! Sounds interesting! Get that next chapter up soon!

Author's Response: Glad you liked the lines . . . Gertie is trying to talk plainly here, without saying too much. I think you'll find Poppy much more plain spoken.

The next chapter will be up in a couple days. It will be breakfast with Quin before Minerva leaves for Hogwarts and Albus. Thanks for reviewing!

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Date: 07/08/2007 Title: Chapter 55: Breakfast al Fresco

Neat chapter! I love Quin's attitude throughout...even when Minerva's upset! What a cool little charm! On to the next chapter! I hope that Quin comes back into the story soon!

Author's Response: Quin will eventually turn up again, but not for a while. But he'll be in and out of the story a few times, so you'll see more of him! Thanks for reviewing!

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Date: 07/08/2007 Title: Chapter 56: Return to Hogwarts

Uh-oh...I think Albus might have caused a few problems with his sudden interest in Minerva getting out of Hogwarts to socalize...hopefully Gertie or Quin or even Val could give them a push in the right direction! Great chapter! Keep them coming!

Author's Response: Val would probably just push one of them off a pier, or something! Haha! Glad you enjoyed this chapter. In the next chapter, Minerva visits Poppy. It will be up soon, possibly tomorrow evening. Thanks for reviewing!

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Date: 07/10/2007 Title: Chapter 57: A Conspiracy of Witches

All right...let me just say...GO GERTIE & THE REST OF THE STAFF!!! Val is sooo horrible...at Albus' own cottage!?! Grr...I hope something bad happens to Val, & soon! I absolutely loved this chapter!

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked this chapter. Don't you just love conspiracies for the good? *grin* Thanks for reviewing! I'm going out of town soon, so I'll be posting a couple more chapters before I leave, then there won't be anything for at least a week. So, enjoy!

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Date: 07/10/2007 Title: Chapter 58: Hot, Cold, and Tepid

Wow...this chapter was a little darker than the others. Oh no...why did Albus have to be so short with Minerva? I hope Hagrid's alright...is it something to do with his dog or another one of his "pets?" & where is Minerva going? To visit her sister, brother, Quin, or somewhere else? Please hurry & get that next chapter up!

Author's Response: Albus is trying to maintain a professional distance while staying friends with Minerva . . . he's not doing a good job of it because he's uncomfortable. You'll find out in the next chapter where Minerva went. The next chapter will be up tonight -- so you haven't long to wait!

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Date: 07/11/2007 Title: Chapter 59: The Comforts of Home

Oh, come on...that's such a mean cliff hanger!!! I've been waiting forever to find out what happened between Albus & Minerva after Carson died!!! Hurry up & get the next chapter up! I'm dying here! I wonder if Albus will be drunk when Minerva gets back...that could be very interesting! I love how everyone else (including Minerva's parents) seem to know about Albus & Minerva's feelings for each other! & I think that it's great how Minerva's parents are trying to set them up! Great chapter!

Author's Response: Well, it's not the ENTIRE world that knows -- just those close to them. And Merwyn and Egeria are aware of Minerva's feelings, but were unsure of how Albus felt until he showed up out of the blue that afternoon looking for Minerva -- now they are beginning to think the feelings may be mutual. *wink* I have to leave you guys with the occasional cliffie -- how else would you appreciate the relief that follows it!? *grin* I'm glad you liked the chapter, though -- thanks for reviewing!

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Date: 07/13/2007 Title: Chapter 60: Mistakes and Misunderstandings

That was a pretty cool chapter! What a fight (almost like a married couple?). I loved the part with the cliffs!

Author's Response: Thanks!

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Date: 07/13/2007 Title: Chapter 61: The Magic of Memory

Great background story for Albus! I'm glad to see that Albus & Minerva are beginning to reach an understanding finally! Can't wait for the next chapter! Have a great vacation! You deserve it after turning out this many chapters in such a short time!

Author's Response: Thanks very much! There will still be a few hiccups along the way, but most of them will be minor . . . notice I used the word "most," not "all"!

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Date: 07/22/2007 Title: Chapter 65: Debate and Dissension

Interesting, the idea of a committee. I must say that I prefer your version of Albus to the version DH. He is certainly more likeable & less manipulative. Another great chapter. Keep them coming!

Author's Response: Well, I'm glad you like him. I think he's still recognizably Albus, though. And he's not without his flaws! More of which we will see in the future. But he's lovable, nonetheless, I believe. :D There will be another chapter up in a day or two, I believe. Just needs one more proofreading before posting. In the next chapter, we'll find out what's been bothering Hagrid!

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Date: 07/26/2007 Title: Chapter 67: Many Meetings

Poor Albus...I really liked the scene at the end of the chapter. I hope that we get Albus' thoughts next chapter, & mabye a step in the right direction? Great chapter as always! Keep them coming!

Author's Response: Yep, we start off the next chapter with Albus's thoughts . . . I'm glad you liked the scene at the end there. They are getting closer all the time, and they'll make more progress in the next few chapters, however they have a few bumps yet to encounter, and a major slip -- and a slip often means a fall, and falls often hurt . . . . Thanks for reviewing!