mariah 2004.08.13 - 09:48PM 1: The Puppy Speaks Out Anonymous [Delete]
Damn, that was good. I love Draco/Ginny fanfics.
Ice 2005.03.11 - 01:06AM 1: The Puppy Speaks Out Signed [Delete]
I like Draco Ginny pairings. Very good for so short a fic.
chasexperience 2005.08.27 - 02:03AM 1: The Puppy Speaks Out Anonymous [Delete]
must love draco/ginny: D/G
I stumbled upon this today and have found it to be quite an interesting story! There is one minor thing I'd like to point out... trivial really when it comes down to how wonderful I'm finding your story, however, it is something that you might want to address. Sprouts name really is Pomona, its not a fannon little wedge. I find the Harry Potter Lexicon a wonderful resource for factual information regarding the series... they take what is in the books as well as compile all the information from JK's interviews for research use.
Another great chapter, and I'll be especially happy when chapters 13-15 are back from your beta and up. I think, in the last chapter, it was easy to see how everyone would be afraid of Harry believing he wouldn't survive, and reacting the way they did, yet, it must have been terribly hard on him. Having Sirius to talk to, and agreeing with Harry that it was a possibility, probably helped him more than all the knee jerking no reactions everyone else displayed.
<~~~ eager to see more.
Author's Response: Chapter 13 should be submitted tonight.
In canon, I only give Harry a 50% chance of surviving through Book 7. After I wrote everyone else's reactions, I realized he needed someone with a more realistic view. (And I think most of the Order, etc, would be horrified at the thought of Harry believing he was likely to die.)
Thanks for the review. I hope you enjoy the last three chapters.
Oh wow....
Author's Response: :-) Thanks.
Gwad... office politics, it's enough to make a person want to scream. It will be interesting to see how this forced truce between Remus and Snape pans out.
Author's Response: It very definitely is. I have to say that this story flows better for me when I've had a bad week at work. I just dump all my frustration into these characters and it invariably sets up a nice, juvenile dynamic suitable for any junior high homeroom or office full of alleged adults.
Thanks for the comments!
Jen
Spring 2006: We are very sorry to announce that this story has been abandoned. We thank you for following along, but HBP canon has just shafted too much of our plot. :(
Rated: L
Categories: Drama
Characters:
Genres: Mystery/suspense
Warnings: Slash
Series: None
Chapters: 16
Wordcount: 2140 - Hits: 1258
Complete?: No - Published: 03/19/2005 - Last Updated: 10/19/2005
Whoohooo two for the price of one!!!!! I hadn't realized chapter 10 was up, as well as this one, thank goodness I was updating today! Awesome chapter as always ladies, can't wait to see what's up next.
Author's Response: Thanks! Yeah, the update announcements have been neglected of late, my bad. *curses moving* ;-) Glad you found this one without help! We'll be back to whoring updates soon, I swear. ~Lee
Ooooo a new chapter!!! Very nice ladies :o).
I'm still on tenderhooks, waiting to see if Remus is actually going to go to Greece or not, and how he -- along with the rest of the scooby gang are going to fight the weird O guys.
Author's Response: Oh, glad you're still on board! More Remus coming up... if Lee has anything to say about it... :)
fairyp80 2005.04.13 - 07:47PM 1: A Double Trouble Birthday Rhyme Signed [Delete] hehehehehehehehehe this is hilarious Author's Response: Thanks for the review, Fairy. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
dragonsong 2005.04.14 - 02:41AM 1: A Double Trouble Birthday Rhyme Signed [Delete] I rather enjoyed it actually. True you aren't a poet, but who is now a-days? It was cute, amusing and it did rhyme from time to time. I liked it and am hoping for another little tickle of my funny-bone. Author's Response: Thanks, dragonsong. I freely admit that I am no poet, but I was aiming more for humor anyway. I'm glad you found it amusing.
Bambu 2005.04.15 - 07:33PM 1: A Double Trouble Birthday Rhyme Signed [Delete] Wolf Moonshadow... it was irreverent and funny. I loved the fact that Voldemort is a hot commodity... as a dart board. Author's Response: Thanks Bambu, I admit I'm a hack as a poet, so irreverent was the best I could do, and it just seemed to fit the twins.
meoki_pixie1525 2005.04.29 - 11:22PM 1: A Double Trouble Birthday Rhyme Signed [Delete] wat do u mean you a bad poet? i wouldnt even be able to think of something to rhyme wiht not alone make it interesting and tickle a funny bone or two! you did really well i loved it!! rite more pls! Author's Response: Thank you! I really did just write it for fun, so I'm glad that I was able to tickle your funny bone along the way.
Capricorne 2005.06.06 - 04:34PM 1: A Double Trouble Birthday Rhyme Signed [Delete] very creative! even i, the greatest poet ever, wouldn't be able to come up with a poem like that! joking, but seriously. that was awesome. Author's Response: Thanks Capricorne, I'll gladly bow to the wisdom of the greatest poet ever! ;-> I'm glad you enjoyed it.
StarrySky 2005.11.28 - 05:49PM 1: A Double Trouble Birthday Rhyme Signed [Delete] Hee, I can hear the boys' singing this as I read it. Serious lurve for the poem here. And I don't think this is bad, as a Weasley by the name of Ron might say, it was 'bloody brilliant'. ~Starry Author's Response: This was written at about two in the morning, with the mental image of the twins trying to pull every April Fool's day stunt they could. Once I started, I just couldn't stop; their voices do get into ones head. ;-> I'm glad you liked it, StarrySky. Thanks for the review.
JesusWillSave 2005.12.03 - 03:57PM 1: A Double Trouble Birthday Rhyme Anonymous [Delete] What a clever poem! It's really good! Author's Response: Thank you! For some reason, I just can't seem to keep the twins quiet. :-)
harmony_bites 2006.05.18 - 05:30AM 1: A Double Trouble Birthday Rhyme Signed [Delete] Ah, Twins birthday on April 1, Voldie as dartboard--and all the rest--I tell you I'm very impressed. Author's Response: Harmony, thank you for the wonderful review! This was written on a whim at two in the morning on April fools day last year. I know it’s silly, but the twins can always make me smile when I try to write them.
pookah 2007.04.18 - 02:58AM 1: A Double Trouble Birthday Rhyme Signed [Delete] This came up at random. Not Shakespeare, but amusing. Thanks for sharing it. You even got me thinking about what sort of charms Aberforth could have used on his goats--- in a family-rated story, mind you!
Ah damn, ew.... the sad, sad thing is, now as I read CoS to my brat boy I am going to be picturing this when we get to this scene. *shudders* aaaahhhhgwad... and in a sick, totally revolting way, I could see this happening.
That said m'dear... when will I see more of YCHOWTO or another new piece from you??
Author's Response: LOL...this came to me when reading that scene. Just goes to show you that fandom causes brain warpage. Next chapter of YCHOWTO is nearly done, and I've got two more stories I'm writing now that I will post when they are completed. :-)
Wow... beautiful
Author's Response: thank you so very much for your review! I'm so pleased you enjoyed it! I have another story here called "Wrapped around your finger." I do hope you'll read and review there as well! -Cerridwen
***Claps****
OMG this is so funny. I just love it, especially the whole exploding microwave but. So now, just one questions... when are we gonna see more?
Author's Response: ***bows, because I can't spell curtsey***
Thank you so much, celisnebula! I'm so glad you enjoyed it! I am trying to his second chapter from Snape's POV, and hopefully it will be up when I finish it. :-)
~Lisa
*chuckles*
“Oh no, you should see him when he is in a bad mood,” chuckled Sprout. “He really is an excellent teacher; those of his students who don’t commit suicide pass their exams at an exceedingly high rate.”
I am so glad I wasn't drinking anything at the time I read that. This is so funny. I've always wondered what they did *do* for the parents who had reservations about sending their magical children off to someone vague and unfamiliar.
I wonder... does Snape make potion ingredients out of those who do commit suicide prior to their exams?
Author's Response: You know, it really wouldn't surprise me in the least... ;-)
At least that way the dunderheads are good for something! . ;-)
Creepy...
It would be interesting to see if she still lives on Grimmauld place as an adult, and if, perhaps, still remembering, notices all the odd going ons now.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I thought about Sorrel. The whole secret witches-and-wizard thing really, really frightened her, and she did see peculiar things from time to time. But not as an adult. After she left school she never lived in Grimmauld Place again, but emigrated to Australia.
I still think you need to develop this more.
I'm greedy... I want more, more, more!
I can send you my first born for payment something as an incentive to write more.
Author's Response: Thank you so much, celisnebula! I am going to be working on a HBP-compliant Snape version of what happens while Harry's after the Horcrux, but it won't be anything very humorous. And I've got to get a couple of WiPs whipped into shape first. But I'd love to know how you did a strike out... and if your firstborn weeds. :-)
~Lisa
Oooh I'm the first review!!!
I like this... delicious irony. Will you be adding more? I'd like to see how Draco reacts to the proposition. Although it's good as a stand alone.
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it. My arm's being twisted (*grin*), so I'll probably be writing more.