I can never resist a good cross-over, and this didn't disappoint. Oh, my aching sides! I lost it completely with your description of the tower and its new beard. Oh, and the Muggle Trigger, that was genius! Only two tiny nits: I'm not sure Filch would call Arabella "Bella" simply because of Bellatrix Lestrange, also called Bella. Also, I'm not 100 percent sure on this one, but I don't think any part of the castle goes beyond seven floors, so the tower would only go to seven. Unless this was an especial, enchanted tower, I could buy that :) But those are minor. I really, really enjoyed this.
Well, it took me long enough but I finally got around to reading this. Drat, but I'd like a time-turner to have infinate time to read! I've never read King, might have to check her out next time I go to the library. Very neat concept for bringing Holmes into the story.
Author's Response: Hello, Pigwidgeon! Ah, for more time to read! Laurie R. King's works are worth a look, and she's got a new book coming out shortly.
I'll answer both of your posts in this response: what started the whole idea was the opportunity to bring two brilliant, eccentric charactaers together and watch the sparks fly! Blessings, Niamh
I like Holmes' reactions to seeing Hogwarts and the staff. Yes, I imagine this is how a Muggle would react to seeing an enchanted castle and meeting its more eccentric inhabitants. Heh heh heh. Love how you ended this. You can just see and feel that there is going to be a LOT of tension between Snape and Holmes.
Love the tension between Snape and Holmes. Their exchanges are priceless. It's hysterical that everyone can see how much alike these two are -- except the gentlemen themselves, heh heh.
Author's Response: Thanks for the good words, Pigwidgeon. This fic was so much fun to write. I dearly love both gents! Blessings, Niamh
The plot thickens ... drat the lateness of the hour! I can hardly wait to get back to this.
Love how you slipped in the Sherlock Holmes/Conan Doyle lines in this one!
Ouch. I almost feel sorry for Rodolphus. Wonderful use of description, especially the "Muggle fads" rug. Loved the emotions, his love for her at the beginning, their sorrow of losing a child, his horror at the suspicion that she was being unfaithful, his helplessness when he finds out the truth. Nicely done!
Oh wow! This is so neat: a story from the point of view of a house-elf! Very cool! Hmmm ... "thanked the Valar"? that sure gets the wheels turning. And the name Bjardadr. Does all this mean what I think it means? Nice job capturing the distinct "voice" of the elves, particularly the narrator.
Bwaahaahaahaahaa! I have tears running down my face, I'm laughing so hard. This was brilliant! Wonderful! Hysterical! I think, to an extent, we can all feel for the poor author. Characters do have a way of butting in at the most unusual times to present these great ideas ... and no pencil or paper, or computer is available.
Wow. Minerva and Sibyll working together. A "60s" family. An elevator. This is great!
Author's Response: *Grins* What was I on when those ideas meshed in my head? ;) You want some, don't you?
Oh please tell me you'll have the next bit up soon, heh heh heh. I'm enjoying this! What is that stuff, anyway?
Author's Response: As to what the 'stuff' is, all will be revealed. I'm working on the next bit now :) I come and read reviews and it inspires me. Usually a writer of one shots, this in-the-middle-of-story review thing is like, major writing aphrodisiac! ;)
OOoo, you updated! Awesome. Hee hee hee -- that was strange. What was in that bottle, anyway? On to the next chapter ....
Heh heh, cute. Never quite saw Dumbledore and McGonagall, but this was sweet. Nice to see McGonagall breaking loose and having fun.
Oh wow, I thought I was twisted!
Author's Response: ;)
Wow, good, if chilling, start. This is a very believable "Voldemort is now dead" aftermath story.They are all a mess, struggling for some normalacy in their lives. Very sad, and I don't know who to pity the most.
This chapter gave me the creeping willies from beginning to end. Those dreams, especially, gave me goosebumps. Nicely done!
This was incredible. A haunting theme of "I am not needed" throughout. And no, they were not needed, Harry, Severus and Remus, at least, not as they were pre-Voldemort, But could they reinvent themselves for lives after Voldemort? In one case, no: the ghosts of his past haunted him too greatly, ghosts which rose to the surface once the distractions of the war were over. In another case, I think so, since he has found a younger, but living and hopeful, verision of his "ghost" and a purpose in exploration. The third? Hard to tell. He is still sitting on that fine line -- he, too, is haunted by ghosts of the past, with two men he cared for and couldn't save. However, unlike Remus, Harry has a good, firm tie with the present world, the post-Voldemort world.
Author's Response: Thank you very much, for your reviews and your insight! It's always terribly reassuring when someone's reading of a piece is so much in line with what I was trying to write. I'm very glad you enjoyed it.
Very cute! James is so endearing, yet so exasperating, heh. Enjoyable read.
Author's Response: :D Thank you very much!
Hysterical! Very cute ficlet.
A very, very nice take on "The Monkey's Paw" story! While I "saw" the answer to the first wish, the second and third were still a bit of a surprise. Nicely resolved. What an ending, too! All in all, an enjoyable read.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Once I started, I could "see" all three wishes, and their results.
Monkey's Paws are so much fun. ;-)
Wow, nice! I love Snape's role, too, and he's right. Masterful short story.
That was brilliant. You are left until the end wondering if this was really happening. Now we see why the magic and scientific worlds don't mix, generally. But what a happy ending :D Very origional, despite the protestations of your hysterical disclaimer.
Author's Response: Thank you Pigwidgeon! It was originally supposed to end as dream, but since we were being so silly anyway, we decided to let poor Susan actually go Hogwarts. And no, magic and science usually don’t mix well at all, though it would be fun to try! ;->
A very sweet Christmas tale. I'd like to see this expanded -- maybe more dialogue, flashback. But I really like this. It's very hopeful.
Author's Response: Oh, just wait for the first chapter. This isn't a one-shot like every other story I've posted here. I promise there will be more in the coming chapters. Thanks for the review!
*sigh* This was just beautiful, even in re-read. Loved the last lines, especially!
Author's Response: Hiya April! Thanks bunches! As you know, the last lines are from Amazing Grace...I think that if anyone can appreciate that song, surely it is they who, like Snape, who have come the farthest from darkness to light.
You are very welcome, and this was a nice re-read. It went a lot faster than I remembered, and the tension was nice.