Hi I'm hillstar,
I'm an avid reader and writer of Harry Potter fanfiction. My favorite pairing is Remus/Narcissa.
This story is really interesting. I like that I've finished the first two chapters and I can't tell exactly where it's going. You do a good job setting Remus character, showing how he is worn out from the trials of his life but eager to make a difference in the Order.
I like this insight into Remus and Dumbledore's relationship. This helps explain why they never use the timeturner to stop the war or undo Remus's affliction, as well as numerous over disaster that might have been undone. I also like how you tackled Remus's imposter syndrome- of course he would be concerned about whether he would succeed if this was his first job and he was so afraid of the full moon.
Author's Response: Thanks. I'm glad it all made sense. I reckon it would be his first thought - if he could get rid of his disability or not.