Aww. That was so cute and fluffy and romantic. I loved this. :D Well done. (I do think I prefer your dominant!Harry and slut!Hermione, though, from your other fic with Snape in.)
Oh god. xD This is such a brilliantly written piece of... writing. How descriptive I am, hah. I would say that this is one of the sexiest things I have ever had the pleasure of reading, but I'd sound about thirteen, and that won't do, will it? The description of the sexual acts is perfect. Absolutely perfect. Thank the deities for fanon. I loathe Harry and Hermione both, but in this piece you made them thoroughly loveable, in more ways than one, I daresay. You're a brilliant writer. I'll be looking for more of your work. Whatever you do, don't stop writing!
Aww, this is so cute. I love your little rhyme scheme.
Very nice.
Author's Response: Why, thank you! I am glad you enjoyed reading it. I must say that out of the fanfiction I have written, this is my favorite.
Hmm.
Not bad, but terribly fast-paced. You should have drawn out the sex more, love.
Author's Response: I'm not a drawn out sort of person... I like it fast paced!
Hah, this was cute.
I love your language. It's never drab, it's just absolutely beautiful. It flows wonderfully. I love the way you weave your sentences. Wow. Such skill. I'm really going to study your composition, love. You've inspired me.
Author's Response: Thanks for the praise! But it should go to Vocalion, who kindly betaed this little drabble for me.
I inspired you? Good!
Okay, now that I've finally signed up I can add this to my favourites and tell you how amazing this is. Truly, truly amazing. (I'm the anonymous reviewer, hah.)