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Member Since: 12/18/2004
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Hermione was warned about her new master being "sloppy, unpunctual, easy to distract and all too playful". But she wasn't warned about falling in love with him ... *WIP*

Rated: L
Categories: Romance
Characters: Albus Dumbledore, Hermione Granger
Genres: Humor
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 12
Wordcount: 11425 - Hits: 2306
Complete?: No - Published: 08/03/2004 - Last Updated: 09/04/2004
Reviewer: AngelQueen Signed star star star star star
Date: 01/07/2005 Title: Chapter 12: Some like it hot

Brilliant! Absolutely brilliant! I've been reading this story all day, and I'm totally enthralled! This is absolutely amazing, Max! I've fallen in love with this pairing! *shakes head* Really, I think it rather amusing that Ginny, Hermione, and Tonks all share a single fate: they fell in love with three Slytherin men who, for all their obvious intelligence, are idiots. Again, an absolutely amazing story! I can't wait for more! :)

Author's Response: Aren't all men idiots when it comes to love? ;-)

He was too old, too tired and too cynical. He'd failed too often, he'd disappointed too many people. He didn't trust himself anymore. So he thought about himself. But what was she thinking? AD/MM with hints of SS/HG (in later chapters).

Rated: L
Categories: Romance
Characters: Albus Dumbledore, Hermione Granger, Minerva McGonagall, Severus Snape
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 15
Wordcount: 6138 - Hits: 10322
Complete?: Yes - Published: 01/03/2005 - Last Updated: 03/28/2005
Reviewer: AngelQueen Signed star star star star star
Date: 01/31/2005 Title: Chapter 13: The Silence of Happiness

*chokes* Holy... Is Albus saying what I THINK he's saying?! Oh my... Riveting chapter, Max! I'm on the edge of my seat, waiting for the next one! Just how will Minerva respond? And will Ignatius Pemperbroke get what he deserves, the old-fashioned sot? *growls* Namely, a few well-placed glares from a certain Headmaster, his staff, and a few Gryffindor alumni! *grins* Again, wonderful chapter! Can't wait for the next one!

Hermione thinks she has lost him - and with him her chance to express her love.

Rated: L
Categories: Romance
Characters: Albus Dumbledore, Hermione Granger
Genres: Romance
Warnings: Character Death

Series: None
Chapters: 13
Wordcount: 9480 - Hits: 2185
Complete?: No - Published: 01/04/2005 - Last Updated: 04/27/2006
Reviewer: AngelQueen Signed star star star star star
Date: 01/07/2005 Title: Chapter 1: After the Battle

Interesting! I haven't seen too many stories about this particular pairing and I have to admit that I am intrigued! I do hope to see more of this story! It's a wonderful start! :)

Author's Response: I'm glad you like the story. And I hope I can post more soon.

Reviewer: AngelQueen Signed star star star star star
Date: 01/07/2005 Title: Chapter 2: Back to Normality?

*sighs dreamily* Venice... Albus and Hermione in Venice... enchanting. Wonderful second chapter, Max! :)

Author's Response: I love Venice very much. It's one of the most romantic cities I know. And being there I always feel that this city holds some "magic". That's why I like to have parts of my stories there. I'm glad you obviously like Venice too.

Reviewer: AngelQueen Signed star star star star star
Date: 11/21/2005 Title: Chapter 3: The power of love

*grins and tries not to laugh too much* A baby! :D Albus and Hermione are going to have a baby! *squeals* Now I'm going to be dying to know whether it will be a little girl who will become Daddy's Little Angel, or a little boy who will be Momma's Little Darling! ;)

Excellent update, Max! I was so happy to see this story added to! :) So, they're going to marry 'for the sake of their child.' *snorts* I wonder how long that reasoning will last. ;) Hopefully, those two will get it together and realize just how much they truly love one another! But we're talking about Albus-I-am-as-blind-as-other-men-when-it-comes-to-my-own-personal-life-Dumbledore and Hermione-yes-there-are-times-when-even-I-miss-the-obvious-Granger.

Oy... me thinks we're in for a wild ride. Especially when Minerva, Harry, and Ron find out what happens. But if the boys so much as touch Albus, Hermione will probably hex them into next week. And Minerva will probably get a dose of her own medicine if she does indeed try to castrate Albus for impregnating Hermione. Never mind that it takes two to tango and all that! ;)

Again, excellent job! Hope to see more of this - and all the other wonderful stories - soon! :)

Author's Response: Thanks for your kind review, AngelQueen! You really made my day!
And yes, they're in for a wilde ride. Their friends won't like the news much - and besides they'll have a few problems until they come to enjoy becoming a family.
And I promise I'll update as soon as possible. It's only that my dear beta is rather busy with her real life ...

Harry et al sixth year: The dynamics between Harry, Ron and Hermione changes when five more are adding into the mix. Harry’s conviction of his fight is given life when he learns that Ron, Neville, Susan, Luna, Dean, and Ginny have all found the courage to say Voldemort’s name. Not only can his friends say Voldemort’s name they are ready to take up the fight to defeat him.

Rita Skeeter is wielding her deadly quill at the Voldemort and the Ministry alike. Her quill may put an end to Cornelius Fudge and herald the New Minister. Voldemort and the Death Eaters are grisk for her muckraking mill.

The wizarding world is at war: the Order wins a few battles while the Death Eaters gain new followers while others languish in prison. A new prison, one not guarded by Voldemort’s supporters. The Muggle world suffers when angry Death Eaters go on a killing spree across the UK. When Dumbledore discovers a Voldemort spy nearby, he welcomes them into the fold; hoping that this will give Voldemort a false sense of security.

Harry’s dreams tell him to look to his friends. Therefore, in a moment of sorrow Harry gets a little help from his friend when he tells them of the prophecy, and his dreams of Legacy Order Members and various others murdered by Voldemort or his Death Eaters.

Rated: B
Categories: General
Characters: Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Ron Weasley
Genres: Drama
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 9559 - Hits: 711
Complete?: No - Published: 01/22/2005 - Last Updated: 01/25/2005
Reviewer: AngelQueen Signed star star star star star
Date: 01/25/2005 Title: Chapter 1: Bedlam within the Ministry

Hm... a very interesting first chapter, MagicMaker. The many different threads introduced should make for some great reading as they are explored. Great job! Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: I am so pleased that you are enjoying the story. Yes, I am extremely fond of the open loops of a story. It is one of the first things I noticed about JK’s writing. I will am continuing the story and should close most of the loops before the end of the book. I hope you come back to read more. --- Samantha

Harry Potter receives his O.W.L. results, along with a summons to appear before the Hogwarts Board of Governors to explain his classmates' extraordinary D.A.D.A. scores.

Rated: S
Categories: Humour
Characters: Harry Potter
Genres: Humor
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 5573 - Hits: 1602
Complete?: No - Published: 03/21/2005 - Last Updated: 03/22/2005
Reviewer: AngelQueen Signed star star star star star
Date: 03/26/2005 Title: Chapter 1: One Shot

Wow, Ramos, that was great! I rather liked Harry's healthy dose of paranoia when it came to Percy... will that boy ever get his head out of his arse? Hermione standing up and practically asserting herself as a lawyer for the Fifth Years was rather in character as well. And Neville got his Patronus! *grins* I especially enjoyed your choice for his animal! *laughs* Again, wonderful job! A most enjoyable read!

A confrontation between Hermione Granger and Draco Malfoy has explosive results.

Rated: B
Categories: Drama
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Hermione Granger
Genres: Drama
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 3202 - Hits: 1811
Complete?: Yes - Published: 04/05/2005 - Last Updated: 04/06/2005
Reviewer: AngelQueen Signed star star star star star
Date: 04/07/2005 Title: Chapter 1: Coalescing

Aww... Bambu, how sweet! Very nice story! It was rather sad, knowing that Draco had chosen his path, and thus the path for practically all of Slytherin House. He really was a product of his upbringing... And Harry and Hermione... *smiles* Beautiful. Wonderful job! :)

Author's Response: Hey, AQ, I'm so glad you found me here. I never thought I'd write a Harry/Hermione, but this little scene really was plaguing me, so I decided to use it as a warm up for the next chapter of Summoning. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Unexpectedly the final battle comes to Hogwarts and Hermione finds herself in the Forbidden Forest, alone with two Slytherins.

Rated: B
Categories: Drama
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Hermione Granger
Genres: Drama
Warnings: Character Death

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 3006 - Hits: 2595
Complete?: Yes - Published: 04/10/2005 - Last Updated: 04/10/2005
Reviewer: AngelQueen Signed star star star star star
Date: 04/11/2005 Title: Chapter 1: My Treasure

*blinks away tears* That was beautiful, Bambu! Stunning! The reality of war really hits home when you see some of the most beloved characters dead and gone - Hagrid, Snape, Dumbledore, and so many more. I loved the whole Hermione/Blaise pairing, as well as Draco inevitable acceptance of it. It is so him not to accept it for nearly a year, but still eventually does so. Stubborn little dragon... ;) Again, beautiful job! :)

Author's Response: When I sent this little piece to SnarkyWench (my beta) she sort of smacked me for killing off Snape (he is my favorite Slytherin after all), but I thought it worked so well for this piece -- especially that his last act, posthumously, is to cause Hermione to falter in her path, allowing her life to be spared as a result. There's some sort of irony or poetic justic in that, I think. I hope. Anyway, thanks so much, AQ, for the review, as always... it just makes my day.

According to the prophecy, Harry Potter must kill Voldemort to survive. During his final years at Hogwarts, Harry will train his body and mind to face the Dark Lord, but that will not be enough to defeat him. In the end, it will be the “…power the Dark Lord has not.” This mysterious power is more wonderful and terrible than death, human intelligence, or forces of nature. This is the power that will protect Harry. This is the power that will enable him to fulfill the prophecy.

Rated: B
Categories: General
Characters: Harry Potter
Genres: Mystery/suspense
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 5
Wordcount: 5185 - Hits: 8687
Complete?: No - Published: 04/11/2005 - Last Updated: 05/24/2005
Reviewer: AngelQueen Signed star star star star star
Date: 04/12/2005 Title: Chapter 1: The Mirror

*falls off of chair* Wow! What a first chapter! That was really something! And the Burrow's burning?! *chokes* Oh no... I hope the Weasleys are alright! Really, cindale, that was a great chapter! So many hints at different things... Remus and Petunia know one another, Petunia and Lily's relationship was a close one at one point, Remus is now Harry's guardian, and the BURROW IS BURNING! *wrings hands frantically* Wonderful job! Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: AngelQueen Signed star star star star star
Date: 04/20/2005 Title: Chapter 2: Burning

Oh my... a great deal going on in this chapter... the destruction of the Burrow, Percy and Pettigrew's deaths... renewed lessons with Snape, OWL results, the Umbitch still making problems, Aunt Petunia acting human, and now something has happened to the Creeveys. Oh no... not Colin and Dennis... as annoying as they are, they're cute kids... Still, wonderful chapter, cindale! Very nice! I'm really enjoying this story so far! It's a great read! :)

Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying it! Thanks for your reviews!

Reviewer: AngelQueen Signed star star star star star
Date: 04/30/2005 Title: Chapter 3: Changes

*wrings hands worriedly* Oh no... something's happened to Remus... *tries to remain calm, but doesn't quite manage it* No... let him be all right, *please!* Can't lose our dear Moony! Another great chapter, cindale! Very nice! And more new elements! Draco's distancing himself from his housemates, Ron and Hermione's relationship, the lack of Ginny appearances, Harry's reinstatement to the Quidditch team, and the Sorting Hat's message, which is a very good one I think. It's going to be difficult, though, for Harry and Ron to move beyond their prejudices. But they've got to learn that not all Slytherins are members of the Inquisitional Squad. Blaise Zabini and Daphne Greengrass are just two mysterious figures in Slytherin and little is known about them. Once again, excellent job! I shall sit and hope that Remus is okay... *bites nails worriedly*

In this short songfic, Blaise thinks about the choice he has to make.

Rated: B
Categories: Song Fics & Drabbles
Characters: Blaise Zabini
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 993 - Hits: 1015
Complete?: Yes - Published: 05/06/2005 - Last Updated: 05/07/2005
Reviewer: AngelQueen Signed star star star star star
Date: 05/14/2005 Title: Chapter 1: Something

*sob* Oh my... that was beautiful, Bambu! Absolutely stunning! Terribly sorry I took so long to review, I'd read it, but then got called away before I could respond. Things continued on from there. The conflict for Blaise was so touching. Sometimes I think many fans forget just what might be behind the "Junior Death Eaters'" choices when they choose to side with Old Snakehead. Family means a lot to them, just as much as it does to people like the Weasleys, or even Harry himself. Some of them just don't have the strength to turn their backs on the path their parents have laid out for them, to leave their families behind. But I'm glad Blaise found strength in his love for Hermione... *smiles sadly* Again, beautiful story, hon. Amazing.

Author's Response: You're as perceptive as ever, AQ. It actually started with the first phrase from the song which made me wonder if the attraction could be something that Blaise was trying to resist... and then why would he resist. I completely agree with you in regard to many of the younger generation of Death Eaters. Thanks, as always.

Hermione, being a methodical girl, has planned out her entire life. She’s been successful following it academically, but her private life hasn’t gone according to plan. She’s decided, therefore, to no longer trust to luck, but instead take matters into her own hands.
*WIP*

Rated: L
Categories: Romance
Characters: Albus Dumbledore, Hermione Granger
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 2
Wordcount: 7703 - Hits: 1226
Complete?: No - Published: 06/05/2005 - Last Updated: 06/11/2005
Reviewer: AngelQueen Signed star star star star star
Date: 06/08/2005 Title: Chapter 1: Hermione's plan. part 1

Oh my... wonderful first chapter, Max! :) I love the way you've had Hermione and Albus' relationship grow! Excellent work! :)

Reviewer: AngelQueen Signed star star star star star
Date: 06/11/2005 Title: Chapter 2: part 2

*falls off of chair* She's going to do it! Woo! :D And now she begins the long, winding road to love! :) Wonderful chapter, Max! :)

Author's Response: *helps AngelQueen up on her chair and pats her affectionately* I'm glad you like the story so far - and you're right: Hermione's decision will make for a long, winding road to love!

What does McGonagall say to Umbridge the night Arthur Weasley is attacked by Nagini?

Rated: C
Categories: General
Characters: Dolores Umbridge, Minerva McGonagall
Genres: Fluff
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 1226 - Hits: 754
Complete?: Yes - Published: 11/30/2005 - Last Updated: 12/01/2005
Reviewer: AngelQueen Signed star star star star star
Date: 12/01/2005 Title: Chapter 1: Stalling

*grins* It's stories like these that remind me why Albus Dumbledore and Minerva McGonagall are two of my absolute favorite characters. Excellent job, Aleisa! *giggles*

Author's Response: Thank you so much. I am really enjoying writing stuff about them.

Hermione in the time of Tom Riddle fic. With the outcome of the final battle looking bleak, Hermione is sent back in time to Tom Riddle's day in order to change something... but it's up to her to find out what.
NOTE: I haven't given up on this, I just had to take some time off. Look out for updates! -ww

Rated: B
Categories: General
Characters: Hermione Granger
Genres: General
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 3
Wordcount: 1541 - Hits: 1499
Complete?: No - Published: 12/16/2005 - Last Updated: 12/27/2005
Reviewer: AngelQueen Signed star star star star star
Date: 12/17/2005 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Ooo... fascinating premise, warewolfe! You did an excellent job portraying the chaos of the battle. Draco's confrontation with Lucius was also awesome. :)

Can't wait to see what Hermione's going to do in the past. Will she recruit Dumbledore and a few others, perhaps the younger versions of the older members of the Order and their allies? McGonagall should be around at that point, as well as a few others. Moody, for example (though, he might be a little less paranoid than we know him to be. Good or bad? ;) ).

Again, outstanding job! Can't wait for more! :)

Author's Response: Draco is so much fun to write. He's so wry. Keep reading! ;) Thanks for the review! -W

Reviewer: AngelQueen Signed star star star star star
Date: 12/17/2005 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter One

Dumbledore! *cheers* He's here and Hermione's in contact with him! Yes! This is good! And Hermione's obviously relieved to see him. :D I know I would be. It sounds like, even at this time, Dumbledore is capable of making everyone feel safe and not have a care in the world! *hugs Dumbledore* Why, oh why did you have to die? *sob*

Excellent job, warewolfe! This story has really caught my attention! Can't wait to see what happens next! How will Hermione explain this? :)

Author's Response: I know, I miss Dumbledore so much. His death was such a shock, even though I had already guessed he would die... I just didn't expect it in such a manner. GAH. Hermione will work on explaining this in chapters to come... keep reading! Thanks for the review! -W

Reviewer: AngelQueen Signed star star star star star
Date: 12/27/2005 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter Two

Oooo... so Hermione now has a new identity! Cool! Great chapter, warewolfe! :D