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Severus/Adult!Padma, with a kinky twist. A young woman under pressure from her family to marry and have children meets a stranger in a darkened club - thus beginning a shadowy love affair of anonymous encounters conducted entirely in the dark. For a time, they are exactly what the other wants and needs. But as the intimacy - and affection - grows between her and her unknown lover, she begins to long for a different fate than the one her parents think is best for her...
First Runner-Up for the Multifaceted Fanfic Award for "Aphrodisia ~ The Het Smut Award."

Rated: L
Categories: Porn Without Plot
Characters: Padma Patil, Severus Snape
Genres: Drama
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 2
Wordcount: 9922 - Hits: 2610
Complete?: Yes - Published: 01/10/2005 - Last Updated: 01/10/2005
Reviewer: SataiDelenn Signed
Date: 12/17/2010 Title: Chapter 1: Part 1

Hmm... Well, I KNOW I've reviewed this story, so I'm not sure why said review isn't here. Oh well.

Regardless, I just want to reiterate how much I LOVE this story. Very heart wrenching, very beautiful.

Maybe I identify so much with Padma in this story because I too want nothing to do with marriage, and I detest children, and cannot fathom even remotely why any woman would WILLINGLY go through the IMMENSELY AGONIZING experience and distugustingness of childbirth. Let alone get pregnant in the first place. The thought of a nearly microscopic parasite writhing around inside of me, and GROWING for nine months leaves me feeling nauseous.

And I LOVE the way you portray Severus in this. I'm sorry, but I have to disagree with the person who said your portrayal of Severus is not to her liking. I mean, I think a lot of the stress he was under during the war is what made him so unbearable and hateful. Since the ending of the war, no, he wouldn't become "Little Miss Sunshine," but I think much of the stress would be gone, and therefore a slightly softer side might emerge. He still hates the children he teaches, and I can't see him ever not hating them, but I feel he's become more human since the war ended, and since finding Padma, he's been able to let go even more. Yet some of his insecurities (obviously) remain, and that is definitely realistic.

Anyway, again, I LOVE this story. It is most definitely one of my favorites!

Thank you!

A girl comes from a strange, migratory nation to Hogwarts. This story very gradually evolves into a romance with her Head of House, Snape.


Note: This story has been shuffled to agree with canon.


Warning: HPHBP spoilers.

Rated: W
Categories: Romance
Characters: Original Character, Severus Snape
Genres: Romance
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 13
Wordcount: 3428 - Hits: 1133
Complete?: No - Published: 03/28/2005 - Last Updated: 06/21/2007
Reviewer: SataiDelenn Signed star star star star star
Date: 12/26/2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Introduction

Well, I know it's been almost four years since you last updated, but I really like this story. I do so hope that some day you pull this back off the shelves, dust it off, and go back to working on it, because it's really good!

retired featured story The wizarding world is abuzz over a new book by an anonymous author. Hermione accidentally discovers who that author is, and it might change her life - and his - forever...

Rated: L
Categories: Pureblood
Characters: Hermione Granger, Lucius Malfoy
Genres: Alternate Universe, Angst, Drama, Romance
Warnings: Non-consensual Sex

Series: None
Chapters: 8
Wordcount: 35696 - Hits: 3434
Complete?: No - Published: 09/28/2008 - Last Updated: 12/06/2008
Reviewer: SataiDelenn Signed star star star star star
Date: 10/24/2010 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8

AGH! OK, PLEASE say you are still writing this! I've totally been drawn in, and would really love to see more!

Completed! Abducted by Lucius Malfoy, forced to reveal her most intimate secrets to her professor...Hermione was really not having a good day. Please note the warnings! Joint winner of "Courage" in Round Four of the Multifaceted Awards.

Rated: L
Categories: Pureblood, Wolfsbane
Characters: Hermione Granger, Lucius Malfoy, Remus Lupin
Genres: Angst, PWP
Warnings: BDSM, Slash, Torture

Series: None
Chapters: 10
Wordcount: 17388 - Hits: 11271
Complete?: Yes - Published: 09/29/2008 - Last Updated: 03/08/2009
Reviewer: SataiDelenn Signed star star
Date: 09/26/2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

Wow. This didn't end at all as I thought it would. Still, I liked it. I can't believe that in a way I actually feel bad for Lucius.
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Anyway, thank you for finishing this story. I swear, every time I think you've abandoned it, and I leave for a while, I come back later to find you've added more, lol.

Remus/Hermione smut!

Rated: L
Categories: Wolfsbane
Characters: Hermione Granger, Remus Lupin
Genres: Angst, Fluff, General, PWP, Romance
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 2
Wordcount: 4950 - Hits: 879
Complete?: No - Published: 09/29/2008 - Last Updated: 09/29/2008
Reviewer: SataiDelenn Signed star star star star
Date: 09/27/2010 Title: Chapter 2: The Waxing Moon

As usual, I am loving your stories! Will you perchance be updating this one? I really did love Molly's little barb at Remus, lol.

Remus finally gets what he's desired for.

Rated: L
Categories: Wolfsbane
Characters: Hermione Granger, Remus Lupin
Genres: PWP
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 1
Wordcount: 2902 - Hits: 536
Complete?: No - Published: 09/30/2008 - Last Updated: 09/30/2008
Reviewer: SataiDelenn Signed star star
Date: 09/27/2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Well, for the most part, this was good. You just might want to edit the following:

Use "ungh, or ohhhh, or oooooh", in place of "ugh", since "ugh" is used to represent disgust, not lust.

Also, you should replace "shuttering" with "shuddering" since you're not closing the shutters on a window, but writing about Hermione shuddering in pleasure beneath her lover...

Other than that, it was a good scene.

The Ministry has passed a new law-- the Magical Creature Protection Act-- aimed at conserving and protecting endangered and dangerous creatures from harm.

Sounds harmless enough: harsher fines for illegal breeding, more stringent penalties for killing dragons, better funding for the removal of pests.

Werewolves have been shunted between the human and beast subheadings of the Department for the Regulation and Control of Magical Creatures for years. Is it any surprise that this time around, they're beasts?

Rated: B
Categories: Wolfsbane
Characters: Remus Lupin
Genres: Drama, Friendship
Warnings: None

Series: None
Chapters: 15
Wordcount: 72299 - Hits: 23641
Complete?: No - Published: 09/30/2008 - Last Updated: 09/30/2008
Reviewer: SataiDelenn Signed star star star star star
Date: 09/27/2010 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Dehumanization

YES! I found it! I'm so happy! I thought I'd lost this story after Wolfsbane was shut down!

I know it's been two years since you updated, but I do hope you haven't abandoned this story. I'm just going to assume that you've put it on hiatus until you're ready to return to it. On that note, I'm adding it to my favorites list so that I can watch for any potential updates! (hint hint)

When a Muggle takes an ill-advised shortcut through the woods she gets more than she bargained for when she encounters Lucius Malfoy. 

Rated: W
Categories: Pureblood, Romance
Characters: Lucius Malfoy, Original Character
Genres: Fluff, Romance
Warnings: BDSM, Non-consensual Sex

Series: None
Chapters: 3
Wordcount: 13096 - Hits: 1469
Complete?: Yes - Published: 04/08/2009 - Last Updated: 05/03/2009
Reviewer: SataiDelenn Signed star star star star
Date: 10/24/2010 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 - Freedom?

Very good story. My only issue is with the very end. How is her pregnancy explained if she thinks Lucius is a made up dream? Further, how does she know her child's father is a wizard since she thinks Lucius is a dream? Sorry, I have problems with things that fail to make sense is all.

At first she didn't quite believe her eyes. Severus Snape here, on her doorstep, was so far outside the realm of anything she'd ever believed possible that she couldn't fully comprehend what she was seeing for a few seconds.

Rated: W
Categories: Drama, General
Characters: Albus Dumbledore, Bill Weasley, Draco Malfoy, Dudley Dursley, Harry Potter, Hermione Granger, Lucius Malfoy, Minerva McGonagall, Original Character, Petunia Dursley (nee Evans), Severus Snape, Sirius Black, Vernon Dursley
Genres: Alternate Universe, Drama, General
Warnings: Character Death, Implied Character Death

Series: None
Chapters: 3
Wordcount: 23702 - Hits: 821
Complete?: Yes - Published: 08/09/2010 - Last Updated: 08/10/2010
Reviewer: SataiDelenn Signed star star star star
Date: 12/26/2010 Title: Chapter 1: Part One

I've read the whole story. I'm not quite sure what to make of it. I liked parts of it, and truly hated other parts. I definitely liked how you tied all the different timelines and universes together though. It was clever how you showed the importance of how making one choice affects or can potentially affect the outcome in another. So, in that regard at least, well done. Though, I'm not quite sure I like the ending left hanging like that.